Corrected the pages 6,11,19 and 34. Thank you for all that pointed out the typos!

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Page 11: make be → make me

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Thx for pointing it out. will fix it after I wake up later!

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Page 6: Haven't meet -> Haven't met
Page 19: Blanc -> Blank

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Page 34 top right bubble am cute -> is cute?

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Learn English and/or get a proofreader.

rough grammar (just a sample)

every page: missing punctuation

p.2 actuall
p.2 boyfirend x2
p.2 living up the past times > this makes 0 sense. Make up for the past? Make up for the lost time?
p.2 the boyfriends speech bubble > boyfriend's
p.19 along with the bunch you spilled > the bunch? what?
p.20 iis
p.31 that's alright to be selfish > it's alright
p.36 throbing > throbbing
p.36 kiddin > kiddin'
p.38 painter > lol. you mean artist or mangaka
p.38 has been decided > this is a literal TL from the JP and makes no sense in English. Has been announced is prob what you meant.
p.38 this erotic drawings > these
p.38 loosing

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@ cutegyaru; nah, no boyfriend

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