I have realized one thing in making this comic: I SUCK AT DIALOG AND PLOT.

So I apologize that the writing and storyline in this comic is terrible. It's not my thing. I just make comics for fun and release them for free.

Oh, and pages 82/83 are not missing, the series was just mis-numbered.

Will continue if I can find a good way to continue the story.

honestly, not even that bad compared to a lot of the shovelware comics that get uploaded by artists, and the models aswell are good ones, and there are actually sequence pages rather than just off-panel transformation

so all in all, 7/10, especially when compared to the majority out there (including many who charge for their works)

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Great comics!

Wish you'd continue with the "Audience" though

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Great comic, thank you!

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this is a fairly good comic !

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@Alex667 Working on that one ;) Yes there will be more!

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@Zer0TF Sorry for the spam, but in response to your comment about not being good at dialogue writing or plot, I really like this storyline and would be interested in lending a hand. I've already written a couple chapters past this point for my own enjoyment. If you're interested in them let me know and we'll get them to you.

I will say though I enjoyed the dialogue so far in this.

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This is actually quite nice, Zer0TF.
I'm hoping for more. It doesn't seem like shoveled stuff. I like the fantasy here. I also appreciate the more "human-like" proportions.
Thank you!

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Gender bend and giantess

My two faves tysm

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I hope it will go on someday its GREAT!

I still hope, that it will go on someday.

Last edited on 31 January 2024, 23:44.

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