1. You used the 1280x downsized version of the images. Download the archive, download the non-downsized torrent, or click the images, scroll down and click "Download Original."
2. Learn to redraw. Leaving white blotches everywhere is jarring. Guides below.
3. Punctuate. This isn't optional in English. Add periods and commas where they need to be.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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"I translated something in an awkward, clumsy way, then laughed at my own translation".

Uh, good for you? If "incredible seeding" sounds awkward to you (and you're right, it's awkward as fuck), did you think of using a different word, like "mating", "breeding" or "insemination"? You don't HAVE to go with the first result google translate/jishou/deepL gives you.

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Guys I think she might be a woman

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@cutegaryu how about you translate it then pal? This isnt X Factor, you dont need to be a judge, just either enjoy the translation or move on boy

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