Something I wanted commissioned, be sure to check out the Takagi one too once I upload it.

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Translator:Stargazer

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Huh, usually the forced one is first, then the lewd one

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pg. 1: Did you wash it properly after you jacked off and before you went to bed? > Didn't you wash it properly after jacking off before bed?
pg. 1: senpai > Senpai
pg. 2: Whenever your cock rubs my narrow throat, I feel an urge to throw up > Whenever his cock rub my narrow throat, I feel the/an urge to throw up ("I feel the/an urge to throw up whenever his cock rubs against my narrow throat" is a more natural way of wording this)
pg. 2: senpai > Senpai
pg. 2: Moreover, using all my throat to rub this cock > Moreover, I'm using all my throat to rub this cock
pg. 2: I'm stroking deep this big gland myself (???)
pg. 2: ...no > ...No (it's the start of a new sentence)
pg. 4: senpai's > Senpai's (two on this page)
pg. 5: senpai > Senpai
pg. 6: W-What did you make me eat just now...? > What did you just make me eat...?
pg. 6: That touch is sexual assault! > Don't touch me like that! That's sexual assault! (or you can just say, "That's sexual assault!"
pg. 6: I want to be out of this just from looking at that disgusting > Just looking at that disgusting thing makes me want to leave
pg. 7: It's even entering my...stomach... > It's even going into...my stomach (using entering is awkward here)
pg. 8: in your dreams... > In your dreams... (capitalization is important brother)

lots of basic punctuation and grammar errors and the translation is a bit stilted and too literal, i dont like to say it but i wouldn't be surprised if this was an MTL

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@Mr_Person Maybe he's an ESL translator, minor grammar errors doesn't mean they're using MTL software, as far as I can tell comparing with the original work this is accurate.

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@peace9001
Ah okay, that's fair enough
Though if I'm being honest, if someone's translating into a language they don't have a tight grasp on, they should probably use a proofreader to make sure it doesn't sound stilted and awkward

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Excuse me, do you know the font that was used in the onomatopoeia?

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