For us f:"focus blowjob" + o:"no penetration" fans; the title says it all! I loved the art on this one and the scene, however short, is quite well-developed with lots of great panels. I wasn't hugely knowledgeable about FGO heading into this, but did a bit of research to get the right tone for the character during the second pass on my script.

Synopsis: The head nurse takes command, gives commander great head.

Lemme know if the TL and typesetting are up-to-snuff. I'll fix any errata that come up as quickly as I can. I usually include SFX TLs in the interstices between panels, but there wasn't enough room to do it properly (and a work like this is much tidier without them).

I was eager to give this artist a little more exposure and I hope I've done them some justice! As always: Support official releases to the extent of your ability, and fap to the extent of your need.

Enjoy!

RAW: /g/2129662/3215f8922b/

Nightingale is the perfect character for this sort of doujinshi, and they certainly did her justice
I love you nurse!

And thank you for the TL

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Love Nightingale, happy another doujin of her gets translated. Unfortunately for me, handjob/blowjob isn't doing it for me as the main dish. Anyhow, I hope more Nightingale doujins get made/translated.

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same here. At least a Paizuri and I would have been satisfied for main dish.

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>Read a book titled "This Book Contains Zero Sex"
>Disappointed when I didn't see any sex

Sometimes my own mind is a wonder, a mystery even to myself.

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Looking at the lack of redraws and at these massive white halos everywhere instead is triggering, especially when you REMOVE huge chunks of the image that don't even have any text on them to begin with. This is bordering on defacing.

I very briefly took a look at the TL too, and some of your stuff is... made up? example: page 10: "Don't say I didn't warn you." is complete fiction. As in, it's not even a translation of anything. You just added that sentence in for no reason. It doesn't even make sense lol edit: the stuff that's actually TLd looks fine, tho.

Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

Last edited on 22 July 2022, 18:41.

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I won't be as harsh as the last reply. There are a few liberally translated lines and spots that don't quite fit, but otherwise this is a good and colorful translation of an equally colorful script. Since your portfolio mostly features original characters, I'd advise you to research parody characters to get an idea of their diction. That way, what little you might add from nowhere won't be groundless.
And it's apparent you put effort into making lines erotic, so look into some of the better-written erotica out there on occasion.

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