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Nice Work, seem good so far...
One thing The use of "FUCKING" seem out of sorts with the rest.. the colour palate, the style, the characters... I know one of them got a dick.. but it Jars the flow...

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This isn't porn, this is erotica. Sensual and hot, looking forward to more.

But I agree - those profanities seem out of place.
For example, " Paperwork, not 'stuff'. " would establish the pedantic×easygoing dynamic just as well, in my opinion.
Same goes for " Laverne, you're drenched. "

But except for that, the writing is great and even the first page is dripping atmosphere and character. And the artstyle is excellent, including the 'details'. Very sexy.

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Thank you both for the constructive critiques!
I'm still figuring out the writing aspect of comics, I appreciate this feedback.

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RE: tag "female:yuri"

>Should not be tagged on futanari/shemale-on-female sex

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/yuri

To make this tag justified there must be a separate scene with only females involved. Which I failed to find here, so far.

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I enjoy the Other one of your works Sunday Cake.. but I got to ask do you know Incase. ? because your style is so alike
And I love his/ her work Alfie is the best thing here and of course his over work as well..

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Thanks! I had fun working on that one.
Yeah, he's a great artist, and my s.o. :)

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Well glad to know..Have you just stared doing this or did you do other type of work like Comic books ?
Whose other work do you like.. ?
Me there two others here TOTEMPOLE The Cummoner and STJETPAN SEJIC SUNSTONE series. and FINE PRINT.
The only thing would love is Incase to do hard copies of his Stories Alfie, and a collection of his short stories
Well thank you for your time in replying.. eagerly waiting some more pages..

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Great job! I love it!

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Some of their openings do look pretty grand, now that you mention it...

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How is Polyamory NOT a tag?!

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