a story from [Naomu] M to Shitemite manga / hentai collection into English

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General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

You've already been told twice about your typesetting but haven't been doing anything to improve it!
It's like you want to keep uploading, but there is no appreciation for poor quality. Good Luck!
The TL for the first page seems fine, but please work on your typeset or ask someone with experience to do it.

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RAW: /s/d85d681f92/858563-91

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He came right between her eyes!
As wide-set as her eyes are, though, he couldn't miss.

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(Last Page) Mother of the year, folks.

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