Commissioned by me, translated by me, edited by anonymous.

RAW: /g/2068517/b4822f9890/

For Japanese-English commissions:
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oh my god no titfuck again? is this artist trolling? they made those big delicious milkers but nobody eats them let alone ride it? cmon man
it's like Summertime Saga, so many good milks but don't really have any focus on them at all smh my head.
man if I have spare money I would already commission this Nukaji /g/2120560/e0067a6844/ and Mudoochi /g/1589945/2dcb9a3fde/ work 😔

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Built for sex

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1. Some text bubbles are empty (examples: pages 31 and 33.)
2. Why is her title alternating between "president" and "squad leader"?
3. TL advice: don't stick to Japanese structures, phrases and expressions 1:1. Some of your stuff is extremely awkward to read ("her guard is too high" for example, which is complete nonsense in English. What he meant is that his GF doesn't put out) because you basically TL word for word. Translating means keeping the original meaning, tone, and intent while making it natural in the target language.

Last edited on 06 August 2022, 20:14.

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@cutegyaru
Thanks for that. I'll try to translate less literally in the future.

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You forgot 1 page in the second update. It's page 34 (85.png), it was in the parent gallery.

Edit: Fixed, thanks.

Last edited on 07 August 2022, 00:14.

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@kinoshita_tokichiro
Fixed.

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I appreciate your effort in translating this, but I would highly recommend you to have a native English speaker proofread your script. There are many areas where the dialogue sounds unnatural. I'm sure there are plenty of people that would be happy to help - especially on a story with a popular artist like this one.

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@1*****97
I am a native English speaker. How dare you?

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Regardless, I think it would help. Even professional translations have proofreaders.

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this needs too be a series, 2nd chap when????

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I appreciate your effort reducing file size, as compared to the raw gallery... saving gray-scale images as 8-bit .png instead of .jpg. The color cover page should have been saved as .jpg, which would have resulted in a smaller file size, as well.

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This artist is honestly one of my favourite newer artists. There is so much little details in things you wouldn't even notice normally unless you pay attention to them. In the last self-published work of his, he was drawing the details and drape of a white wet cloth over body parts as you could also visibly see the body beneath the cloth, even. And knowing that a lot of artists avoid drawing toes like the plague (usually by drawing socks or stockings over the feet), this guy's outright boldly drawing toes (and hands) left and right. Her toes being all spread out from orgasm on page 15 is a great example of both that boldness and their attention to detail. I hope to see more from them.

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Who the hell narrates this much during sex?

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everybody's secret bike everyone gets a ride.

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