RAW: /s/80a41f9ea3/1752778-116
ALT RAW: /s/3143881035/1417622-14

Thanks for fixing it, but if I'm being honest, there's a lot of English that's very poor so just fixing the grammatical errors doesn't really fix the awkward wording.

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...and she's smiles radiantly in her pure white outfit > ...and she's smiling radiantly in her pure white outfit. (This sentence could really benefit from a period as well. Something like, 'Miki Imai was the first person I fell in love with. She stands there, smiling radiantly in her pure white outfit".

But I'm the only one with clouded heart. > But I'm the only one with a clouded heart.

if you wonder why, > if you're wondering why, or, if you were wondering why, it was because that smile wasn't directed at me (I have to assume everything here's in the past tense)

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I'm sorry for calling you out and made you drive me around on a day off. > I'm sorry for calling you out and making you drive me around on your day off.

But again, why we're suddenly going to the beach? > But again, why're/why are we suddenly going to the beach?

Aren't you used to go there with the people in your circle? > Aren't you used to going there with the people in your circle?, or, Don't you usually go there with the people from your circle? (idk the context and I don't want to check the RAW)

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If Yuri-chan hear this, she'd be like... > If Yuri-chan heard this, she'd be like..., or, If Yuri-chan were to hear this, she'd be like...

Or by any chance, do you have another schedule today? > Or, by chance, do you have something else scheduled today?

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Consider that a life advice > Consider that some life advice

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Just think like you went to a brothel or something > Just think of it like you're going to a brothel or something, or, Just think of it like you went to a brothel

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Yeah...we haven't do it for a while > Yeah...we haven't done it for a while

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The senpai that I know all this time is... > The senpai that I knew all this time is now...

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Where are your confidence that you got earlier? > Where is that confidence from earlier?

Last edited on 07 August 2022, 11:05.

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Fixed. Thank you!

Last edited on 07 August 2022, 10:50.

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oh? is not even netori in spirit? just someone who regrets not chossing the correct man for her... who says hentai is not realistic? xD

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If they cheat with you, they'll cheat on you.

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Am I the only one who thinks she sort of looks like mai from bunny girl senpai?

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I know this is just a hentai but after reading this I have to some thoughts I need to get off my chest.

The Female MC is manipulative.

If this chapter is anything to go by then the male MC's feelings towards her has always been fucking obvious. Now that her marriage isn't going the way she thought it would she's trying to jump ship over to the MC who is basically her BACKUP PLAN.

@Forgunia: I 100% agree with you. The moment she finds a better option she is going to cheat on and leave the male MC just like what she's doing to her husband.

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