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To readers, I’ve received feed back that my grammar is poor and rough.
So if You could help me improve the grammar.
I will gladly re-edit and adding your name to the credit page.
Otherwise, please just ignore it and fapping on

Note:Thanks to
cutegyaru for the Fonts tips & Tutorial links
iLoveLoli32833 for the improvement in Page-19

>So if You could help me improve the grammar.
Here's my advice:

Either find a competent proofreader or learn English, the latter being the better option. Why are you translating something in a language you struggle with? The best way to learn honestly would be to... read. Go read some books, try to pick up on natural phrasing and conjugation. Also, you probably need a grammar book.

Also, here's other stuff you should take a look at:

1. Punctuate. This means adding periods and commas. This isn't optional.
2. Minor complaint, but some of your typesetting needs work. Your text is often too big, you're using a SINGLE font, which encompasses dialogue, SFX, and moans, and your text is sometimes off-center. I've linked guides below.

General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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Telling someone to learn English is a pretty tall order. It's not an easy language. I'd say having a fluent proofreader would be the better option.

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Pg 4
Man, the recession must have hit Nemesis pretty hard.

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This was a pretty sweet story, thank you for the post

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why do people who obviously don't know english INSIST on translating into english?

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I waited until the end thinking the girl would be raped by ugly monster Kannon but nothing happened. What the fuck?

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Thank you all for your reply

@cutegyaru: Thanks for all the tutorial links, I will look into it. For the proofreading part, my only option right now is to get better unless someone actually helps me for free

@Tsubasa Fullmoon: I guess I have to lurk more on discord to find someone to help me until my English is good enough

@bagofdicks: Because I want to be better in English? And because there are always people moaning and bitching on the internet, especially about grammar. So the day that no more comment bashes me about it is the day I know I'm good enough. But seriously, I'm just tired of waiting

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@ero_ghoul
no offense mate but there are many different more helpful ways to improve your English than mangling doujins like this
i can fully understand and wholly appreciate someone both wanting to TL doujins and wanting to learn another language, but frankly this isn't a very helpful way to do it, for you and the community

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Yes, another artist who hasn’t fallen into the massive tit pit. Super sexy stuff.

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Not wanting to lose your boyfriend sounds romatic.
Trying to keep him dependand on you by abusing his gambling addiction and prevent him from becoming able to sustain his liefestyle himself, less so.

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