"Testiculs" Lol.

I really don't understand why so many people who clearly can't speak or write English feel the need to translate Japanese doujins into English.

Anyways, requirement for the Rough Grammar tag.

Page 2: "As young miss ask" missing a "the" in there. Also wrong tense.

Page 2: "Testiculs" Misspelling

Page 2: "This look painful~" Correct word is "looks"

Page 3: "Probabely" Misspelling

Page 3: "Cant stand the crave to touch your dick..." Should be craving, though this entire sentence needs to be restructured.

Page 3: "and to shot my semen~" Past tense instead of present tense. Should be "shoot"

Page 4: "Thrusting deep into your troat feel great" Misspelled "throat."

Page 5: "Once I make it strong you will come right away." Technically grammatically correct, but doesn't make any sense.

Page 7: "I will trust my penis all the way down." Misspelled "thrust" which is especially egregious because they spelled it correctly previously.

Page 7: "This feel good." Should be "Feels"

Page 9: "Three more time sond good." Misspelled "Sound". No punctuation. Can't tell if it's a statement or a question.

Not to mention the myriad of capitalization issues.

Last edited on 17 August 2022, 03:56.

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@Tatchy
Sometimes it's the artist trying to be nice to the english audience, or the circle trying to do it cheaply.
It isn't always randoms on the internet doing it poorly with or without machine TL.
Dunno who attempted this though.

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AFAIK rough grammar and rough translation only applies to fan translated work, not official or author-sponsored English releases.

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Fair enough. Didn't realize it was the author releasing it. His English is better than my Japanese.

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Kinda weird that rough grammar doesn't apply to official releases. The mental interruption of sloppy wording is a boner killer regardless of who did it.

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I don't think an official translation would use x1280 resamples.

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