Inukami Inoji
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Thanks for the translation, cute story!

Last edited on 17 August 2022, 15:12.

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"Wow he's SUCH a tomboy!" (draws her with long nails, long eyelashes and earring)

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So damn cute.

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@shaddy746 if you can please have a native English speaker proofread or quality check before posting. Some of these errors are really obvious and would have been easily fixed. At the very least run the sentences through a grammar checker like Grammarly or quiltbot.
Here are some grammar corrections (and some other notes, please note that I didn't translate anything, so I'm taking your translation at face value):
pg1p3b2 - They are eating on the terrace.
pg2p2b2 - I also got that impression. (The at first is not necessary)
pg2p2 - Her friends don't realize the cuteness this boyish girl has...
pg3p2b3 - So the lecture ended? (This is more preference than anything. Being so formal it feels like she's asking the question instead of stating a nonsequitur.)
pg3p3b2 - I'll refer to them for my next report.
pg4p3b1 - The "If" should be on the same line as "you say" (overall there are many bubbles that can be shipped a bit better)
pg4p3b3 - You don't have your part-time job today, do you?
pg5p1b1 - That girl... She hasn't been able to hang out with us recently...
pg5p5b1 - Maybe it's her boss. (This is a preference)
pg6p1b1 - Still Kazari has a girlly face, right?
pg6p4b2 - I-I think... That greeting should've been said before the kiss...
pg7p1b3 - Oh stop it... I'm still not used to that. (I'm assuming this is a mistranslation because the look on her face clearly says she's not used to being called cute.)
pg7p3b2 - Great! Can you undress and show me?
pg8p1b1 - I-I don't think it suits me...
pg8p1b2 - It's really naughty after all! (or, "This lingerie is really naughty!")
pg9p1b2 - put "In" on the same line as "the"
pg9p2b2 - your-self (I suggest using something like syllablecount.com if you aren't sure where to put the hyphen in a word)
pg9p4b1 - I feel so uncomfortable, this doesn't suit me at all... (The way it's currently written, it reads that it physically doesn't filter her and that's what's making her uncomfortable. That is clearly not what's being portrayed here.)
pg9p5b1 - Don't you think my usual sporty underwear suits me better?
pg10p1b1 - So tell me... How did it feel wearing it at school?
pg10p1b3 - At first, I felt so embarrassed I thought I would die...
pg10p2b1 - But soon after, I felt at ease. I realized no one could see what I was wearing underneath.
pg10p2b3 - ...that caught me by surprise.
pg11p1b2 - You're already this wet without any foreplay... (there has clearly been no foreplay yet.)
pg11p2b2 - I'm this wet just from that...
pg11p5b1 - Here, feel for yourself.
pg12p4b1 - It was just recently you had your first kiss, Kazari-chan.
pg12p4b2 - And now you're doing stuff like this... ("Stuff" is never pluralized as "stuffs", use "stuff" or "things")
pg13p1b1 - But you're moving your fingers on your own...
pg13p4b1 - Thank you for indulging me. (My preference)
pg15p2b1 - Sometimes you hit it with your teeth, but I don't mind.
pg16p1b2 - That's the technique I told you about...
pg16p1b3 - It's so intense... at this rate...
pg16p2b1 - Kazari-chan... You seriously practiced it for my sake...
pg17p3b1 - "this" should be on the same line as "is"
pg17p3b2 - The act that gives men satisfaction...
pg18p2b2 - This must be the biggest shocker for me this year.
pg18p4 - Stop ganging up on me...
pg18p4b3 - We have no idea what's going on.
pg19p1b4 - Well, I don't discuss adult topics with Kazari at all...
pg19p2b1 and 2 - Wow, is someone over here getting too excited?!
pg20p2b1 - I think having sex with a condom would ruin the mood...
pg20p2b2 - With you being all seductive and adorable in front of me.
pg21p3b5 - (This bubble just doesn't feel right continuing with what she said in the previous bubble)
pg24p2b1 - I'm going to let it out inside! (sorry what you have there just doesn't sound sexy.)
pg29p1b4 - So be my woman, okay?
pg32p1b3 - Something like that never used to faze you.
pg32p1b4 - Is that so?!
pg32p2b2 - You've become so girly.
pg32p3b1 - (That "is" should not be on a line by itself, that looks really silly)

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Adorable waifu :3

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Copying @ChronoStriker1 comment for rough grammar tag.
pg1p3b2 - They are eating on the terrace.
pg2p2b2 - I also got that impression. (The at first is not necessary)
pg2p2 - Her friends don't realize the cuteness this boyish girl has...
pg3p2b3 - So the lecture ended? (This is more preference than anything. Being so formal it feels like she's asking the question instead of stating a nonsequitur.)
pg3p3b2 - I'll refer to them for my next report.
pg4p3b1 - The "If" should be on the same line as "you say" (overall there are many bubbles that can be shipped a bit better)
pg4p3b3 - You don't have your part-time job today, do you?
pg5p1b1 - That girl... She hasn't been able to hang out with us recently...
pg5p5b1 - Maybe it's her boss. (This is a preference)
pg6p1b1 - Still Kazari has a girlly face, right?
pg6p4b2 - I-I think... That greeting should've been said before the kiss...
pg7p1b3 - Oh stop it... I'm still not used to that. (I'm assuming this is a mistranslation because the look on her face clearly says she's not used to being called cute.)
pg7p3b2 - Great! Can you undress and show me?
pg8p1b1 - I-I don't think it suits me...
pg8p1b2 - It's really naughty after all! (or, "This lingerie is really naughty!")
pg9p1b2 - put "In" on the same line as "the"
pg9p2b2 - your-self (I suggest using something like syllablecount.com if you aren't sure where to put the hyphen in a word)
pg9p4b1 - I feel so uncomfortable, this doesn't suit me at all... (The way it's currently written, it reads that it physically doesn't filter her and that's what's making her uncomfortable. That is clearly not what's being portrayed here.)
pg9p5b1 - Don't you think my usual sporty underwear suits me better?
pg10p1b1 - So tell me... How did it feel wearing it at school?
pg10p1b3 - At first, I felt so embarrassed I thought I would die...
pg10p2b1 - But soon after, I felt at ease. I realized no one could see what I was wearing underneath.
pg10p2b3 - ...that caught me by surprise.
pg11p1b2 - You're already this wet without any foreplay... (there has clearly been no foreplay yet.)
pg11p2b2 - I'm this wet just from that...
pg11p5b1 - Here, feel for yourself.
pg12p4b1 - It was just recently you had your first kiss, Kazari-chan.
pg12p4b2 - And now you're doing stuff like this... ("Stuff" is never pluralized as "stuffs", use "stuff" or "things")
pg13p1b1 - But you're moving your fingers on your own...
pg13p4b1 - Thank you for indulging me. (My preference)
pg15p2b1 - Sometimes you hit it with your teeth, but I don't mind.
pg16p1b2 - That's the technique I told you about...
pg16p1b3 - It's so intense... at this rate...
pg16p2b1 - Kazari-chan... You seriously practiced it for my sake...
pg17p3b1 - "this" should be on the same line as "is"
pg17p3b2 - The act that gives men satisfaction...
pg18p2b2 - This must be the biggest shocker for me this year.
pg18p4 - Stop ganging up on me...
pg18p4b3 - We have no idea what's going on.
pg19p1b4 - Well, I don't discuss adult topics with Kazari at all...
pg19p2b1 and 2 - Wow, is someone over here getting too excited?!
pg20p2b1 - I think having sex with a condom would ruin the mood...
pg20p2b2 - With you being all seductive and adorable in front of me.
pg21p3b5 - (This bubble just doesn't feel right continuing with what she said in the previous bubble)
pg24p2b1 - I'm going to let it out inside! (sorry what you have there just doesn't sound sexy.)
pg29p1b4 - So be my woman, okay?
pg32p1b3 - Something like that never used to faze you.
pg32p1b4 - Is that so?!
pg32p2b2 - You've become so girly.
pg32p3b1 - (That "is" should not be on a line by itself, that looks really silly)

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