I am adopting myself to a bigger group to learn properly, thank you and good day :)

Thank you for the english translation! If you allow I'll point out some errors.

p8: some japanese + heart in the bubble
p11: "SENSE'S"
p16: "SENSE'S" and "SENEI" in two different panels instead of Sensei's/Sensei
p16: "we shouldn't go any more than this" -> "we shouldn't go any further than this"

Probably some more (but minor ones) but since I'm not a native english speaker I am not the one who should point out errors/mistakes.

(nice, some errors even fixed while I wrote this comment)
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About your credits page: Disowning a gallery doesn't delete the gallery. It's just that the name of the uploader will be gone. The gallery stays.
So, don't do that. Also people can see what japanese works you translated (what might be good), since they can see if you improved and listened to other people tips. And of course your overall translations.

And it's probably a good idea to remove the nh-site part since this is word filtered here. Or at least just use NH instead of the full name.

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Just some quick comments from me:

1) Please attempt to redraw instead of just slapping a white box over the old text. Redrawing is an important part of the scanlating process. Increasing the stroke to cover more of the original text is a technique used to reduce the amount of cleaning. If you seriously can't, then at least make a fake text box or something.

2) Try to use more fonts. The artist used handwriting for the moaning and other sfx, which is distinctly different from the normal font, but you used the same font for both.

3) Try googling heart text symbols instead of using <3. It's quick to do and looks a lot better. ♡

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We're really gonna be stuck with you spamming your half-assed shit just because you want to scam some poor souls out of their money, aren't we?

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Ruined by fucking over censored zebra dick.. why the FUCK do people even bother translating this shit! Find some real doujin that are not fucking over censored!

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