Updated translation

Since some of the other parts of the tankouban has already been translated so i just felt to release this one as standalone especially since it's just meant to be a better translation than my original one.

Raw: /g/2255092/d67b07ac9d/

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@PokeDiePie

Any plans of translating this one too?

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As it seems to be a spin-off of this story.

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@Amauri14 Eventually, just waiting to check what Jirou-senpai's story for this month is and I'll probably do this storyline or the athlete one next. Since I'm just doing this as a hobby and nobody has actually messaged my twitter for commissions I can't exactly guarantee it being finished fast.

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@PokeDiePie Oh that's great to hear. Take all the time you need.

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Like the plot but why Japanese like so much the ugly bastard thing? Its a waste.

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@Pokediepie i cant find the twitter handle

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@Ronnie42 https://twitter.com/HentaiDiePie?t=Q1w8rCjmQ1fSiHdfL-AVUw&s=09

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@Qiilapute
that way I can self insert easier :)

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This artist does 2 types of male faces - apes and fuckboys. Legit makes me debate DLs sometimes.

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