Her nick name is "Flash" because she fell for mind control in a flash. At least Kirito is out there somewhere getting butt fucked as a trap, so alls well that ends well.

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And in general several questionable lines.

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Here is suggestion for a sick netorare story. No mind control. Asuna actually going out with some ugly bastard IRL and kinda cheating. Then she uses virtual reality machine in bed while her new BF stays IRL. She goes on a date with Kirito in VR. So kissing Kirito in VR corresponds with BJ her BF in real life. Passionately hugging Kirito corresponds with hugging and leglocking in missionary position. Horse ride with Kirito together on one horse is doggystyle anal. Etcetera. Could be a standalone story instead of SAO doujinshi.

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