Thank you for the upload and the note about the fan translations, although it's pretty evident due to the editing and font. Nevertheless, the translations were pretty well-done from what I could see, though page 3 of Doodle 03 has a tiny misspelling.
"Beleive" is the misspelled word.
As for the work itself, this is why I love Juna Juna Juice, and somewhat frustrated from him at the same time, and stuff that is produced. A LOT of hot and sexy scenarios and sexual plays between the same characters keep things from getting too dull or repetitive. However, seeing some of these as really short doodles leaves me yearning for a longer doujin.
Base +25, Deep in +5, Pitzarew -6, Gitami +13, hairdo +7