RAWs: /g/2296932/054cdc51a2/
Chinese: /g/2300204/13be464e43/
Korean: /g/2298995/bd2dc7dfc5/

COMPILATION BOOK: /g/2652228/14cbd1a608/

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Thanks a lot to this anonymous commissioner for commissioning this doujin.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Base +6, oceansama +11, Wisenheimer +7, finnick8 +8

would love it if this series transitioned to fucking the pokemons too

Base +18, Name321 -6, Azura Meta -6, WeebSlayer -6, MKofFS -10, lol5043 -6, thebitstick -6, Botos -7, trykite -6, oceansama -11, SVDDragunov -7, xgf123 -6, coconutpilot -7, and 7 more...

why gotta catch em all when you can gotta fuck em all
two girl down, many to go

part 1 /g/2217033/93daf213f2/

Base +36, cybeast93 +17, Azura Meta +6, Phantombet3 +6, finnick8 +8, GK_GAMES +8

p.3 breath -> breathe (breath and breathe aren't synonyms)
p.6 you are -> are you (sentence is a question; it should read like one)
p.8 You haven't done this kind of things -> You haven't done this kind of thing (why use the word 'this' and then your subject is plural?)
p.8 I don't have sex with just any girl (I'm not a native speaker but this sentence is weird for me)
p.10 To appear just where we're -> To appear just when we're (you're talking about time or the present moment, not the place)
p.10 Hide somewhere near (I need an experienced JP to EN TL for this cause this one is redundant and if I suggest a change for this one it might come out wrong)
p.11 He almost killed -> It almost killed (optional, but I'm a stickler for detail. If the JP text mentions the gender of the noble PKMN "He" is fine; otherwise animals that are not pets are always "it")
p.18 thighten -> tighten (obvious typo)

Base +6, cybeast93 +17, shenanigans1337 +9, 44inf +6, luizsan +8

@PsychicDoom

Thank you! I'll fix those right away.

EDIT:
On page 6, I wanted to convey a sarcastic tone. She wanted to test his strength and he easily defeated her. He's kinda making fun of her. I made it clearer now, I think.
Translation for page 10 (2) is almost literal. I think he's ordering her to hide near so she's not on the way and safe. There's no need to run away, since he'll easily calm that Kleavor.
As for page 11, it seems Noble Kleavor is male in the game, so it's unintentionally correct xD (https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Noble_Pok%C3%A9mon#Lord_of_the_Woods:_Kleavor)

Last edited on 26 August 2022, 21:42.

Base +5, Kingleader42 +4, cybeast93 +17, shenanigans1337 +9, oceansama +11, psionicdecimator +12

In that case, the word "nearby" should be more appropriate. As for the he/it comment, I haven't played a Pokemon game after BW so I have no idea who that is.

Thanks for considering the fixes.

Base +6

I find amazing that this is going to be a series. Excited to see how the other girls get into action!

Base +6, Phantombet3 +6, TheBeStRa +7