It's a rush job, but have fun guys!

A lot of your lines are basically unreadable because you didn't stroke them and they blend with the background or get dwarfed by the un-removed Japanese floating text you decided to write next to 20 font points smaller. Also, learn to redraw.

Tip: you're totally allowed to NOT rush. It's okay.

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holy shit, bewbs is alive

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Stupid sexy doll joints!

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Calling it "basically unreadable" is a bit much.
Yeah, it's not flawless, maybe didn't need to be churned out so quickly, but I appreciate it and it certainly isn't anywhere near the actual bad translation uploads on this site.

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I took a drink every time they said “lactobacillus” and now I’m drunk.

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@JoyPanda
Not everything, but all the unstroked text kinda is. It takes like a few minutes to fix, so really there's no excuse for it.

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That on top of the shoddy translation are holding this back. One thing I'll never understand is why some people feel the need to use curse words when the original text isn't even like that, reminds me of all the meme characters of Americans who just say "fuck" all the time, it's goofy as hell.

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@RKGS
Fuck, I knew I shouldn't have done that.

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is there a better version? this is readable but far from optimal..

ps: it's still hilarious and hot though

Last edited on 15 March 2023, 09:32.

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I seem to be able to read it just fine on my tablet. May I ask what page was giving you trouble or an example of a trouble spot?

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