Timelapse of the first 6 pages are now in a playlist https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL-6C1cVKg8MnYUWwZFjAeBr8f5VNSbNDr

I have multiple questions

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噢！稀少的血缘本！

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This isn't a rewrite because you are the original author and you're just updating the dialogue. A rewrite is when someone independently changes text of someone else's work, usually to completely change the original's dialogue and setting.
Also the scan line effect makes if very difficult to read the credit page.

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玛利亚师姐，我好喜欢你啊，为了你，我要磕兽丸🥵

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所以，这是灵视太高了吧，稍等，我这就回梦境买点火纸消费一下

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Page 6 to page 7: well that escalated quickly.

This is a great work of art.

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It only took about what feels like 20 years, but Lady Maria beat down and the PC having his way with her comic has finally happened.

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