Translated and Edited by Stopittarpit
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Snuffy Stuffy and Snuggly

RAW: /g/2317641/4b141edf3d/

Chinese translation: /g/2316627/7024ba9fef/

Korean translation: /g/2321479/b60f3b03b9/

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Why postscript isn't even translated?

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after so much of his mongirl work, I forgot that Jun made some really great thicc goddess.
thx

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The standards in Hentai-land are pretty high when a girl like her has difficulty finding someone to fuck her and feels the need to resort to blackmail to get a guy to fuck her. 😅

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Honestly, I find the girl less adorable and lovable than others from JUN's past works, although I'm glad that (for now) she has left Bestiality aside (although if it's at the expense of uninteresting protagonists, well...)

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it give me chill while reading this

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Page 26 feels like Amane is talking to the reader, I hope it was intended to be that way.

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She's a force to be reckoned with

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The postscript isn't translated, but I think google lens does a decent job at getting the message across:

"Nice to meet you for the first time. If not, it's been a while. My name is Jun. I managed to make it in time... As always, we can't make progress at the last minute. Well, this time I tried to create an original character with a different atmosphere than usual, how was it? I hope you can feel the gloomy atmosphere of the rainy season. Maybe I've been awakening to M-ish lately, and this kind of character has started to come to me. I've been suffering from the bad eyes and the 2D B-specialist, and I've come to like characters with strong appearances. When it comes to commercial work, it's quite difficult to draw without getting an OK, so I have to do it from time to time as a doujin... In the future, I would like to continue to publish books with strong quirks like this in doujinshi. Ah, but I also want to publish a Gyanko book. Well, I don't know if it will happen next time, but let's meet again next summer!!"

Same text via DeepL:

"Nice to meet you if this is your first time here. If not, it has been a while. My name is Jun. I managed to make it in time.... As usual, I can't make last-minute progress. I tried to create an original character with a different atmosphere this time, but how did you like it? I'm glad you could feel the humid atmosphere of the rainy season. Recently, I've been getting a little bit M-ish, and this kind of character has been hitting me hard. I've been suffering from a habit of bad eyesight and a two-dimensional B-senpai, and I've come to like characters with stronger and stronger habits. I can't draw in commercial magazines because I can't get an OK, so I have to vent in doujinshi from time to time.... I would like to continue to publish such books with strong habits in doujinshi in the future. Oh, but I also want to publish another Gyanko book. Well, I don't know what will happen next time, but we will meet again next summer!"

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rough grammar

tip: don't try to stick to JP structures or phrases. It makes things pretty awkward to read.

p.3 mishima has a nice style. > スタイル doesn't mean style, it means figure. In turn, it's nonsense in English. Style would refer to how someone dresses.
p.3 amatuer
p.3 i feel healed from this pure group of girls > ???
p.5 the reason why... > the reason being...
p.7 and yet you were called to follow me here > I don't understand this. "You were called to follow me"?
p.7 you really such bad taste > have
p.7 so I ended up smelling it > them (gym clothes - plural)
p.8 and that threat's evidence was used against me > and that evidence was used as a threat against me
p.11 risky images > did you mean "risqué"?
p.13 you wanted it all to yourself, right? > should be "them". in the previous bubbles she's referring to herself and her "smells", so it's plural
p.15 it looks like it'll explode any moment > at any moment
p.16 us two came at the same time > we both came at the same time
p.24 those thick pubic hairs > that thick pubic hair (same idea as when referring to head hair) - edit: change are to is
p.24 your thighs stands out > stand

@1*****97
Idk how you can read that and say it does a decent job at getting the message across. Half the sentences are complete nonsense lol

Last edited on 22 September 2022, 02:20.

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@cutegyaru Thanks for posting those corrections - I was about to post some myself. I didn't mean that MTL can replace experienced translators, just that it can sometimes get the general meaning across if you don't have any other alternative. I think it did pretty well this time.

I will admit that the sentence mentioning eyesight and "2D B-senpai" is particularly gross in terms of translation, but I'm guessing that he's tired of bland/boring characters and has come to enjoy kinkier characters instead.

All of the other sentences look like they get the meaning across well.

To summarize - He welcomes new readers and says it's been a while. He introduces himself. He's happy he made it in time because it's hard working right up to the deadline. He tried to make a story with an original character that has a unique atmosphere and wonders if the reader enjoyed it. He hopes the reader can feel the humid/gloomy atmosphere of the rainy season. He says his masochistic proclivities have increased, so this type of character appeals to him. [Sentence that I mentioned above]. He mentions there is more red-tape with commercial works, so he has to self-publish sometimes. He wants to continue to release kinky/perverted self-published stories like this one in the future. However, he also wants to publish a Gyanko [Gundam Build Fighters Try] story. He hasn't decided what his next story will be but he hopes to return next year to Summer Comiket.

I don't know any Japanese. Did I understand the general meaning?

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Shut up nerds, the dialogue was fine.
I was too busy fapping to the girl bullying and raping the shit outta the guy to notice.

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"Shut up nerds, the dialogue was fine. I was too busy fapping to the girl bullying and raping the shit outta the guy to notice."

Considering this was a paid commission, I (and whoever anonymously commissioned this) would kind of, just maybe, probably, possibly expect the translation standards to be well above average.

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@cutegyaru

Thank you for identifying the spelling and grammar errors.
I've made the changes and the updated gallery should be present shortly (hopefully).

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is there a way to search more doujins with this type of girl? Sort of gloomy and unkempt look. Not the yandere part tho I have seen it overlap several times.

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@FloMagol I don't think there's any specific ways or keywords, but they usually fall into the bbw/chubby/NEET category and overlap with reverse rape and yandere which sucks. It sucks since this type of girl is nice to have once in a while. If you do manage to find one the author usually has more in the backlog for what is translated. This is one I enjoyed a lot when it came to unkempt/gloomy girls that don't fit the usual mold;

Part 1: /g/2116737/0765ecd75d/
Part 2: /g/2235115/9b9f9e67a2/

Hope you enjoy them if I understood your post right.

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Yeah, we kinda need a tag for this, maybe "unkempt" would be fitting? I also went on a... porn binge for this girl and yeah BBW and HAIRY sort of fit part of the trope, I actually found those you mentioned, and I would include these ones:

/g/2240642/1a77c36e52/ (Top tier one)
/g/1918460/6233d7a792/
/g/1874097/6d9710d3b2/
/g/1873292/e9526b60ca/

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For anyone who like the gloomy/unkempt genre, I have a few more recommendations from some of my favorite artists for those with access to Fakku unlimited (either legal or not).

1. "Borderline Step Couple" by BeNantoka
2. "I Only Have Eyes For You" by Suruga Kuroitsu
3. "Well Then, Let's Do Our Best" by Henkuma
4 "@Neighbor" by Stasuki Imonet
5. "Out of the Frying Pan Into the Fire" By Satsuki Imonet (for like half of it).

As for non-Fakku works that haven't been mentioned:

-Rororogi Mogera's "Lady K & Sick Man" series - /?f_search=rororogi+mogera+kko+english/
-REDchicken's "Sadako" story - /g/2234192/c4a8148a3f/
-Bifidus - /g/1967632/726d65acda/
-Most of Tanishi's stuff (hairy armpits tag fits very well)
-Korotsuke's "Creepy Glasses Girl" series
-A lot of Suruga Kuroitsu's stories have girls with a gloomyish design, but the non-Fakku story that fits the best is "Unbalanced Love" - /g/1227124/eb6973a79e/
-BeNantoka's "Meet-and-fuck with my Fans" series (mostly the first girl) - /?f_search=benantoka+english+fan+-color/

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Page 30, How to avoid bitches.

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Yeah, I forgot to include "hairy" in my other post, but at least you found it out. Here are two more that look similar with the girl in this Doujinshi that I could remember;

/g/1914126/25772c207e/
/g/1905717/e4c9ff6b44/

Bonus series for good measure;

Part 1: /g/968434/49889d7534/
Part 2: /g/986110/b97fc50bd2/
Part 3: /g/986268/d195a1b7db/

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Thanks guys, def great doujins.

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this is HIGH kino

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When jun made the manga about shaving a bush off, I was disappointed. But it seems Jun was also busy reaching into the cosmos to craft a doujin that contains everything I love. Dominant women, freckles, glasses, messy hair, scent-play, squirting/pissing, a thick bush, subtle use of color. That full-page image of her calling (You) a pervert? Absolute Kino.

There's basically no way I can not pay for this. I need to actually own this!

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@Forgunia: If you can make good comment then why making shitty comments?
/g/936354/8cb242664f/
/g/1103982/f8df91eeaa/ ntr. look at this dumb shit in infancy. can't even read the story
/g/1421913/47b98e0f7d/ he got stopped before he got clout
you should just stay here instead of a being clout seeker in milf galleries
you are a clout seeker in milf galleries

@ suratkabar: cringy " theres actually plot?" comment /g/1619647/c6b085209c/
/g/1552010/4d9c44305b/

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You could give me a cropped image of just this bitch's face and I'd have infinite fap material. She's a goddess.

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thats ugly? shes "yes ma'am" status right there

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E-Hentai NEEDS to add a "jimiko" tag so we can find more treasures with girls like this more easily.

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Ooo thanks for those recommendations up there. There were a couple of gems in there that I didn't know about

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