This is definitely a rewrite, given all the added references. Page 8 should make it clear enough even without reading. There are text bubbles and sound effects added that weren't there originally.
Original: /s/03d2ccc043/2006202-67
This: /s/2ec6aa7a5c/2335802-8

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Then everything belong to America. People often ask me what it means to be an American. I tell 'em it's triumph. Triumph. Triumph when we nuke our enemies. Triumph when our flag flutters in the wind on the moon. Triumph when we peer down from the moon and laugh heartily at Russia. Triumph when we depose one dictator after another. Triumph when we break into the homes of terrorist kingpins on the other side of Earth and shoot them in the face. Triumph when we use flying robots to bomb other terrorists in Afghanistan. Triumph when we were the main reason the Nazis were defeated in WWII. Triumph when we freed Europe twice. Triumph. Triumph. Triumph. But it's not just the the big things, see? It's the way I can set up lawn chairs at my friends house on the Texas Rio Grande and share a toast to freedom while watching Mexicans charge into gunfire to enter my country. It's the way an Italian cabbie sits up straight and floors the gas when he hears my accent. It's seeing the wide eyes and bead of sweat running down the forehead of a German customs agent when he opens my passport. It's the way a French waiter hangs his head when I refuse the wine and ask for Coke instead, in English knowing full well he understands me (and that they have it). The way an Aussie blushes and leans into the urinal next to me in the bathroom, or the scowl that meets my smirk when I tip an English waiter in US dollars covered with Washington's face. The way small mobs of Canadian school children follow me from a distance to see what a free man looks like, or how heads timidly rise and women gather when my accent stops the music in the clubs of Amsterdam. Triumph. Every bit of it, triumph. That's what it means to be an American.

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- Translate from the actual source work & language next time, otherwise even more nuance gets lost (which your group seems to not mind anyways from the completely rewritten lines and acknowledgement in the credits)
- The reason why you probably couldn't find the source work was because this work/author is licensed by FAKKU, so the raw + any TLs (including this one) are going to be nuked likely before you even see this comment
- Like LRaglan said, please don't throw dirt on the author by adding in new text bubbles, SFX and completely rewritten lines

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April fools sure came early this year huh...

Disregarding that this is 100% a rewrite because I checked the raws as kindly linked by @LRaglan.
at least keep it somewhat serious lmao.

What were you trying to accomplish by having things like:
a completely fabricated "To infinity and beyoooond!!!"
"Mary mother of christ... ...uohhhh her tits... her boingo doingos are massive"
"She tastes soo good I want to turn her pussy into a moshpit"
"My men are ready to storm the beaches!"
"I want to make Niwa-San scream like Will Ramos!"

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I dont know why rewrites exist. They are always a total turn off for me

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Note: Proper translation already exists, although you won't find it on e-hentai since it's licensed.

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>Bruh, did I somehow get Cosby'd

Fuccen lel

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Simultaneously the best and worst translation I have ever seen. I actually lowkey like it.

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The only times rewrites are tolerable are when they are obvious parodies, signposted clearly as such and are actually funny. If you can't add humor to porn, you have nothing to add.

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