Something I commissioned

http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/article/04/0030/59/65/040030596573.html
purchase to support the artist.

Translated and Edited by :Aishi21#9569

/uploader/ic21

fucked up with the title if some one can petition name change for it to be fixed

Thanks Andrew Kyle.

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Lmfao done

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Hey Andrew, do you want to fix your gallery name?

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The irony of the title being "A very simple job". Anyway, thanks for porn, Andy.

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have you ever fucked up your uploaded hentai gallery title so bad, you accidentally doxx yourself ?

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>Something I commissioned
I'm sorry you paid money for this.

rough grammar

every page: incorrectt/non-existent punctuation

p.4 Please see with your imagination > See what? Did you mean "please use your imagination"?
p.4 I will come back as more experienced person > a more
p.5 on my sleep > in
p.6 the job given to me was // became a sex working in the ship > this sentence is so mangled. also "on" the ship
p.6 sexual outlet is needed > a sexual outlet
p.7 dumb ass > dumbass or dumb-ass
p.8 you can tell gran to stop being a sex worker > you can ASK Gran. Gran isn't the whore here.
p.8 you'll get excited to the verge of climax, then it'll hold it of then you'll get excited again then it'll hot it off again > massive run-on sentence. also, you should probably spell this out because it's really confusing what all these "it"s are.
p.8 are become
p.9 you know, this cock is > is what???
p.9 it's stink > it stinks
p.15 i was treated as toy > as a toy. prob better as "like a toy"
p.16 throbbing on my lower abdomen > THE throbbing IN my lower...

edit: changes + additions

Last edited on 04 October 2022, 14:09.

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Holy fuck. I didn't see who the translator was cause I was looking at the uploader name. Goddamn I got trolled just because this was a GBF doujin and my blocks didn't filter this trashlease out.

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