2nd iteration changed some translation inconsistencies but still not perfect

Not perfect? This is still just a machine translation. Pronoun errors in almost every sentence. Awful cleaning and typesetting.

Base +8, BUSTERMISSLE +7, cybeast93 +19, Natsam +15, Xalren525 +6, smallestmoist +6, dankestdungeon +22, rsx205 +18, FoerEyes +18, bigscuba +8, herpderp5545 +8, Fr33sh00t +6, Sylphon +6, and 48 more...

Translation: Stray quotation marks, weird wording. Some of the actually translatable text outside of bubbles is simply ignored (pg 2). Typesetting: Overlapping text passages. Font sizes all over the place, although there's enough room. Cleaning: You're not using the same white as the bubbles originally had.

Base +8, dankestdungeon +22, coleccionista903 +6, herpderp5545 +8, Fr33sh00t +6, rsx205 +18, Deep in +5, as102 +13, sonictmp -7, Aldengris +16, nikgtasa +15, funk_u_up +12, faytT +7, and 15 more...

Man fuck off with your godawful MTLs. Jesus Christ. Do you really have nothing better to do than ruin super popular artists like Mizuryu Kei?

Also, you keep using the wrong 1280x downsized resolution.

Base +18, Sylphon +6, rsx205 +18, Danknuggets +9, Deep in +5, as102 +13, dankestdungeon +22, sonictmp -7, bluemana217 +6, aimu23 +6, Aldengris +16, animium +6, blabbo +6, and 34 more...

Username checks out. You do have shit for brains.

Base +9, bluemana217 +6, aimu23 +6, blabbo +6, percent20 +6, lordprotector +6, funk_u_up +12, fap222222 +6, fadefade +14, xX8Death8Xx +7, Kyuume +2, coleccionista903 +6, DesRed +6, and 8 more...

Please stop releasing trashlations, for both of our SAN points.

Base +6, sonictmp -7, bluemana217 +6, lordprotector +6, funk_u_up +12, faytT +7, fap222222 +6, fadefade +14, coleccionista903 +6, Alpha Centari +6, TCJJ +9, darkspirit +7, Spooky Ghost Butts +8

Just once I want one of you machine TLing shitters to realize the damage you fuckers do.

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The translations are clearly messed up and confusing here are some funny examples :
page 4 " we're doing an onahole in the cheerleading squad"
page 9 " put your dick out and put it in your pussy" - wait what??? 😂

Base +15, Animefan268 +6, nisor04 +12, Alpha Centari +6, TCJJ +9, Spooky Ghost Butts +8

keep lmaoin at the state of the site

we tried to warn you but you wouldnt listen

Base +11, lordprotector +6, funk_u_up +12, fap222222 +6, fadefade +14, bigscuba +8, coleccionista903 +6, Sanguine09 +7, Danknuggets +9, rsx205 +18, White Joker -27, Jalis +7, TCJJ +9, and 1 more...

Thanks to that "translation" I now know how it feels to have a stroke.

Base +6, plexorz +9, MixMasterOink +6, TCJJ +9

Well your username is a good fit

Base +8, TCJJ +9

The last speech bubble on page 3 really spoke to me. "I'm sorry for confusing you..."

Base +6, plexorz +9, TCJJ +9

@ hibikiyamada

Yup...'translations' like this should come with a "Health Risk!" warning label...

Base +11, Alpha Centari +6, TCJJ +9, Knife Prty +7

God fucking dammit why would you do this

Base +6, TCJJ +9, Knife Prty +7

The effort is appreciated, but I recommend running the jp through both deepl and google translate, comparing for different translations to check for consistency and filling the holes of seemingly nonsensical sentences via context. This way you will solve at least 90% of your grammar and cohesion errors.

I can't be mad at you since you're making an effort but I suggest you apply this method with MTLs to prevent tidal waves of angry feedback.

Good luck.

Base +7, Jalis -7, EvilSanta -6, bigscuba -8, celcius_01 +16, OMJay -6, TCJJ -9, alels +6, Shino22 -6, Spooky Ghost Butts -8, alterist -10