https://www.dlsite.com/girls/work/=/product_id/RJ353074.html

I adore Oniben Katze's recent work, the guys are so hot.

@rsx205: Holy shit thank you so much, it must have taken time to switch between 2 versions and type out all that. Imma do an edit asap.

@mish2001: Lmao my question also. "Brutish" is an actual word: unkind and violent and not showing thought or intelligence.

So romantic.

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https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Renaming#Naming_Style
Japanese name first then english.

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for rough TL tag

003
OG: てかゆづちゃんヤリマンって噂あるし…あーあ早く別れてくれないかなー
TL: "But there's a rumor that Yuzuka-chan wants to break up..."
ED: the rumor is about Yuzu-chan being a slut and the rest of the line is the speaker wishing they would break up

004
OG: お前ヤリマンって噂たちすぎじゃねーか？
TL: "Aren't there too many rumors of us breaking up?"
ED: the rumor is about Yuzu-chan being a slut

005
OG: そうだよな？俺のスペックで / 俺のスペックでお前ごときが別れたいなんて思わねえよな？
TL: "But looking at how good I am," / "I don't think you'd want to break up with "
ED: for additional detail he's referring to his attributes or qualities that make him more desirable

OG: あーもーうるせえなっ
TL: "Ah I can't-"
ED: he's telling her to pipe down

008
OG: えっ う うん！！
TL: "Eh uhm!!"
ED: she's acknowledging him telling her that he's going home

009
OG: こんな奴別れられるなら私だって早く別れたいよー…
TL: "Guys like this, if I'm gonna break up, I'm gonna do it as soon as possible"
ED: she's saying if she could, she would

OG: 時間はあるから覚えとけよ
TL: "Remember that we'll meet"
ED: he's telling her to keep in mind the fact that they'll have plenty of time

010
OG: あ…あいつならやりかねないんだけど…
TL: "He...he wouldn't do that..."
ED: she's saying he that he probably would

013
OG: まだ濡れてるなすぐ挿いりそう
TL: "You're already wet"
ED: missing part where he says he'll stick it in real soon

OG: ああーキッツ
TL: "In yet - Kuh!"
ED: he's saying it's tight

OG: 相変わらず入口せめーな
TL: "It goes in easily as usual"
ED: he's saying it's tight lol

014
OG: あーイッたばっかのけいれんマンコいいな
TL: "Ah...it's nice to be wraped[sic] by a twitching pussy while cumming"
ED: "a pussy that's cumming" as in she's the one cumming (that's why she's "twitching")

OG: 俺もイクわ…
TL: I'm cumming...
ED: he's cumming "too"

OG: お前イキすぎだろ
TL: "You're so hot"
ED: he's saying she's cumming a lot

016
OG: は？もう？まだ撫でただけだろ
TL: "Huh? Already?"
ED: missing part where he says he only just started fingering

OG: はっやｗ
TL: "Hurry"
ED: "That was fast haha"

OG: イッたばっか♡
TL: "I just came idiot ♡"
ED: she doesn't call him an idiot, she just doesn't complete her statement

018
OG: ゆづまた近くで撮りたいな
TL: "Yuzu, I want to film again"
ED: he wants to film up close again

OG: ほんとヤダってば
TL: "I really want to"
ED: she doesn't want to

019
OG: ねえっ近いからっ
TL: "I-I'm close"
ED: she's saying the camera's too close

020

OG: もうッ…ほんっとあり得ない…わかれる…
TL: "That was hard...I understand"
ED: she's pretty done with his shit and wants to break up

OG: わかったってもう撮らない
TL: "I got it, I'll stop here"
ED: specifically, stop filming

OG: きげんとか… / ないしわかれるから
TL: "I don't get it..." / "what's in your head..."
ED: she's saying she won't "cheer up" (if we're going off of the previous bubble) and she says she wants to break up again

021
OG: はなし…きいてくんないし…
TL: "I don't want to talk to you..."
ED: she's saying he won't listen

023
OG: こいつを見てると
TL: "Looking at this guy"
ED: this is referring to Yuzuka from his POV

041:
OG: もう家出たし
TL: "I already got outside"
ED: "I already left the house"

044
OG: こいつマジでクズかよ…！！
TL: N/A
ED: she's thinking that he's seriously a scumbag

050
OG: 俺変われる自信ねえよ…
TL: "I know I can change.."
ED: he doesn't know

051
OG: ふざけてんのは… / そっちでしょ…
TL: "Mess around..." / "right"
ED: she's flipping it back on him like "you're the one who's messing around"

052
OG: 教えてやるよ！！アンタはクズのメンヘラ野郎！！
TL: "I'll tell you!! You're a douchebag!!"
ED: with mental issues

I don't wanna edit their argument rn and everything else after that

rip I just noticed the disclaimer on pg 2

Last edited on 19 October 2022, 15:22.

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That was... very very toxic

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Brutish or British?

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MTL tag when?

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I dont know if that was abusive relationship or the girl is maso tsundere.

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It has a rape tag and yet people who believe it is toxic still proceeded to read it. What hilarious stupidity. The real toxicity is their hypocrisy.

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>left aligned text
>wrong 1280x resolution
>gibberish MTL that needed to be basically re-translated by rsx205
That's a hat trick.

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You had 10 days to fix your shit after at least two people graciously have done your work for you in the comments, and you still managed to re-release the same turd. "Retorted"? More like "retarded". If you were just shit at translating because you weren't as skilled in Japanese as you'd wish, that would be fine, everyone has to start somewhere. But your dumb ass just used google TL and thought it would be enough, which is inexcusable. Go become a gaming journo, it's where you belong.

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miserable read, unearned ending

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i can't believe this shit is still rated 4+ stars

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