Artist BunsiMasa

Added missing page 5 from artist's pixiv site. From pixiv:

Page 5 of Parody of Terasu MC Kokujin no Tenkousei NTR ru 
Page 5 of Parody of [テラスMC] 黒人の転校生にNTRる
Here is the missing page five with Nao and Ayumu.
Wow, I didn't expect this many responses to my last post! Thank you all very much. I didn't plan on doing any more on this story but since several of my supporters ask about the foreign exchange student I might do a few more pages in Hiroki's life. (Seems like there are many people out there who like ntr where the MC wins for a change.)

ここにナオとアユムの欠けている5ページがあります。 私は私の最後の投稿にこれほど多くの応答を期待していませんでした!どうもありがとうございました。私はこの話についてこれ以上やるつもりはなかったが、私の支持者の何人かが留学生について尋ねるので、私はヒロキの人生でさらに数ページやるかもしれない。(MCが変化のために勝つntrが好きな人がたくさんいるようです。

https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/87139878

Holy shit... someone actually calling the police to report illegal behaviour?! That almost never happens in these kinds of stories.

Good change of pace to see a MC act with more than half a brain and move on with his life.

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The power of superior genes and ntr crumble so easily against one phone call

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Sometime the hentaiverse logic is just ridiculous . Anyways , yes he got his revenge , should have included the faceless guy too .

Last edited on 19 October 2022, 23:47.

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wonder if parodies will take off as a funny trend

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Hiroki may have found a girl and got into university, but he still lost his family. It's still kind of a loss for him.

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Wow for a moment I actually thought this was the real deal but then I saw the word Parody so I knew it wasn't part of the original story. Shame seeing as the MC actually logically and somewhat got ended it all. But at the same time we all know that the actual ending won't be this nice. Willing to bet the moment the women become pregnant they will find a way to dump their kids on him while getting knocked up once again by the black men.

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@kampfer91 not even sure if we can really call that revenge, you can't say he was really "betrayed" because the girls chose of their own will to be/do whatever the foreign kid wanted, if anything he destroyed his own family, by making that phone call, kid should have just left and said nothing would of been the way to go with this not some drama fill ending *shrug* just my opinion.

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I won't call this revenge or win because in the end Kuroki still feel miserable. he never really happy and felt regret destroying his family

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Eh, the family was lost when they started shooting AVs and leaving the DVDs for him to watch intentionally. Snitching on them just expedited what was already going to happen.

I'd like to see what happened to the ex-GF and the childhood friend if the artist is gonna add a couple more pages like previously mentioned.

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LMAO somebo call polic plz in other stories

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Here we see why there is never a call to the police in the works (the story ends soon hahaha) it's really good that this happens sometimes
And yes the MC had revenge (everything was being taken away from him) he would also become a slave to the BBC and the ex family

I hope more works have a parody
It would be nice to see artists doing as sanbun kyoden did originally (he did 2 versions of the work) final NTR and final with the NTR guy losing

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are all this comments bots or something?
anyways, this is lame

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The biggest issue with the original is the racism. Black men are presented as hyper masculine threat and it's part of the real racism and xenophobia that has a strong hold on Japan specifically. Black women don't exist, kind or positive Black men don't exist etc.

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Oh man if terasu mc see this he gonna be mad and show us real end for this story. Ofcourse its not gonna be like that something more retarded like wtf. TerasuMC create Hiroki like kid with strong Will he keep fight even he know he lose but cmon its ntr story so kid 100 % lose his Will and become pathetic cuck as yosuke kun from previos works. Kaya did something more stupid he turn her love in to pathetic cuck but what happened if some other girl aproach this cuck what if he meet girl with crazy head sadistic, gore, vore fetish? I dont think pathetic cuck can say no to someone cuz no have selfrespect. So maybe this author try make parody on Kaya and yosuke manga and let us see what if yosuke have some Brain and selfrespect.?

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@hiroki : I don't think he would pay any attention . There was a doujin of Tachibana household , you know the infamous NTR work ? So a guy drew a happy end doujin in which the shota MC make peace with the mother and sister . The original author didn't mind .

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居然是最後大家結局了啊

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这怕不是国人改编画的 我记得110好像是特有

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From a blacked cuck to a wagecuck, man hiroki has it fucking rough

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日本也是110报警

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應該是改編吧?畫風差太多了...

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finally a good ntr story

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He won, but at what cost?

The cost is probably his innocence, but hey you lose some you win some.

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Only thing that would make it better if Transfer-cuck died in a gang related incident back in the states.

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60,000 yen per month?
That's a steal truly a happy ending for all

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居然都出二创了

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lmao this what more ntr stories need, some sense of realism . But on that note , I don't recall it ever going that far to where the girls were taking/dealing drugs and getting fucked by other guys beside the main black guy. Feel's a bit forced , it would have been better if he got revenge within the realm of the story that has been displayed so far.

But thanks for trying.

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这是要和当年橘家一样出2创嘛

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The phone call that saved vanilla

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@yu_10_10 you know there is more BBC stuff coming from South Korea and USA than Japan. And stories like Kurosu Gatari's one with the Gyaru wife is actually a refreshing take on the concept with the black guy being a nice dude and the cheating part being for a completely different reason than Black Supremacy shinanigans you see in every BBC story.

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看样子是的，整二创的后续，我个人看过的有苦主长大后的剧情，好像只有hana hook的作者自己续写其中一本

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赶紧更新吧，都把孩子逼到自己二创了

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What Hiroki got:
-A Job
-His own place to live
-A Girl
-Accepted into University of Tokyo

What he lose:
-Two Family member that basically already disowned him without he knowing and fucked his enemy
-A Cheating Girlfriend that fucked his enemy
-A Junior that act innocent in front of him but talk shit about him while fucking his enemy behind his back

I say, this is a total win for Hiroki

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@Kampfer91

If you are talking about the one with the Milf and two daughters the kicker with that one was they weren't his blood family. IIRC his original family was never mentioned and eventually he moved in with the mother and daughters.

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没有射精管理不是很认同

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@apary_hobby
That is right, most BBC is coming from China right now, SK is second behind, then we have USA and Japan at last.
Japan, as always, can take a concept and make it a fresh and different one, with Gatari sensei making a better story instead of that stupid Nazi like black supremacy west has.
Stories like Gatari sensei specially the newest with the black guy chef should spread, and all this "Muh RacISm" BS plaging hentai could end.

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we need more ntr continuation stories like this!

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a doujin parody, that's not something you see every day

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very nice ending

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Was quite a surprise to see a parody of this but, I'm glad I stumbled across it and to see the women get some form of punishment for their betrayal.
Would personally love to see more parodies like this or just NTR doujins where the main male character (usually either husband or son) is not a complete pussy/cuck
and actually takes action or revenge in these.

p.s. I did see chapter 2 and that was a pretty dark ending

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最后妈自杀了，黑短发残了

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This is amazing, the good ending. I just discovered this today.

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