Part 1 /g/2321435/27db7528b1/

This author can't decide what kind of character he wants her to be.

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Well, if the previous comic is any indication, she seems happy about it. Sooo... Cheer up, Emo kid? ¯_(ツ)_/¯

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@Wilfriback Most of the shit the author does with her she's a proud anal slut for BBC, so this isn't really hitting because it doesn't feel like it's in character. I'd imagine she would have rubbed it in his face when he found out or something, like "Yeah, you never had a chance" or whatever, but the author tried to go the sentimental "broken girl" route and it isn't good.

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@Kurokami999
Maybe because it's a prequel? Also not sure how much of it is actually her being a "broken girl" or just the dude's perspective on the situations. Even if she is proud I dont think that means she'd be outright mean to the dude about it. And just because she cried when her frend started crying doesn't necessarily mean she's sad about her own situation.

Still it does feel a bit ham fisted regardless. Definitely doesn't match the tone of the other stuff.

Last edited on 28 October 2022, 13:33.

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Relax author already post future for this work where the guy get cucked and she say him prepare his ass for her Black Master cuz its only way for him get fucked only in ass and lick cum as pathetic cuck. So crying shit Just emotional bait for guys Who have hope for happy ending to pure emo guy. Meanwhile i laugh so much wtf why guy Just not leave cuz ntr plot chain him to dusqusting slut childhood friend lol. Get real move on and find yourself Black woman Who have enough proud to not spread her legs no anybody Just for size matter.

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Art 6. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. English 6. All out of 10.

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@hiroki-kun I had a stroke reading that

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