Update Nov 28, 2022

If there are further modifications that need to be made, I will be glad to to modify the story. I sincerely hope that supadupaman does a translation of this, as it would be interesting to see exactly how close or far away this translation is.

a) Fixed: Minor gramatical error page 44
b) Fixed: Minor graphical error page 42
c) Fixed Mistranslations: The bottom panels of pg 13 & most of 14 have been modified to be more in line with the original.

Completed.

Perfection is the enemy of improvement. If there are any grotesque errors please let me know and I will do my best to fix them.

This is a much better story that what is typically encountered in hentai. At the end, even I don't really know why Itsuki is going along with the program.

Does she love Tatsumi? She really does start treating him like a husband from around page 36 or so? Already on page 20, she's treating Tatsumi as boyfriend when she wanted to go see 'that movie'. She had no problem replacing her date with her husband for one with Tatsumi. Or is she scared shitless of him, which is the impression I get from the last two pages as well as pages 35 and 27-29.

Her only action that I don't really buy is that I don't believe that she would have gone along with enslaving Toshiki. I also don't really believe that Toshiki was beating off to his mom, though who knows, he's not the brightest bulb. One thing we can all agree about is that she loves Tatsumi's big dick and the multiple orgasms (can't say I blame her much about that.)

As for the husband, he's sort of a pussy. My biggest question is did he flee the house or not. On page 34 we've got either him or Itsuki apologizing to Toshiki that Dad won't be around anymore, but then by page 45 he's back and joyfully whacking off outside the bedroom. One thing I know is that house wouldn't be big enough for both me and Tatsumi, one of us would have to go, regardless of what it took. Speaking of page 45 & 46, I think that Itsuki
still loves her husband and son, and accepts that these are extraordinary times, so them whacking off together is the least of her worries.

i remember supadupaman said that he'll translate everything in december when its complete . if yu dont know him hes the dude who pretty much translated every terasu work. good job on decensoring but better leave the translation to supadupaman

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yeah im not even gonna read it im gonna wait till the entire thing is out so its not like 1 episode of anime is dropping a week or something lol

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On page 8 he is in middle school but on page 10 he is in high school?

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Didn't this little manlet fag get his face scarred by just someone bumping into him on accident? And now he's trying act like a big man? This is somehow even more pathetic than the other terasu doujins

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@Muffinslover No doubt Tatsumi is a pretty big pussy, even though he's got a big dick. As the story progress we'll see the whole lot of them slowly fall into corruption and decadence. Even Itsuki has her moments when she is a little disingenuous, criticizing husband and son.

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On page 13, in the original conversation, I think the kid is asking the wife how far does the husband's dick reaches in her, compared to him. She says something like "I don't know, I'm not sure, I just have a general feeling.... " then ".... There." And at that point, the kid says something like " Wow! Only this far?! I still have plenty to go!" "Remember this point. After this point, this is a private place for only me and Itsuki, a place your husband can't come, even if he wanted to."

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@masaro Thank you, I'll be glad to make that change. Please let me know if there are other changes I need to make.

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Please don't translate if you suck at Japanese. Especially when supadupaman said he will translate in a month.

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@Asmither supadupaman already said he was gonna do this! It grinds my gears when people don’t bother to read the comments where a translator already said they are gonna translate the work and then it gets snipe by an inferior translator!

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lmao, what a pathetic family. What they're doing is extremely illegal, just call the cops.

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@ChronicLogic You're right, but then Itsuki would lose access to that wonderful dick. I suppose husband could buy a large strap-on and satisfy her that way.

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This doujin is great. The only thing that I don't like was including the husband or some shit. I don't give a shit about them.

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Translation is bad, dialogue doesn't flow naturally and there are errors pretty much every page

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Unfortunately it look like it is an MTL translation

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Phrases like "oh my god", "oh shit", "oh crap" make the characters feel more Western than Japanese and really kills immersion, especially with how often they're used here. Please cut back on stuff like that, or better yet, don't use them at all.

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@LavenderBlack if you give me alternate phrases that make sense in English, or tell me what to do and I'll be glad to incorporate them in the next release.

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🥵hot🥵🥵

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Sometimes there are things worse than death….

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I'm confused, what's the difference between this one and the non β-ban version?

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page 8 there is still a black line on the genitals

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