You're the laziest motherfucker in existence. Also you keep using the wrong 1280x downsized resolution.

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Well, thanks for the translation. At least I have an idea of what is going on here.

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You know, you don't *have* to be a translator. Nobody wants this, and it doesn't benefit you in any way either. You can just stop if you don't want to actually do the work.

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Not bad, keep doing it just pick the work that nobody translated it for long time I'm ok with lazy translator ignore the snob they think they make rule for e-hentai lol

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sadly there's a nice pun on pg 8 that you ignored

001
OG: へぇ
TL: "Hey"
ED: this is an expression of surprise and acknowledgement. what you did is equivalent to translating はい ("yes") to "high"

OG: サインしてあげる
TL: "Okay, I'll sign"
ED: she's giving him an autograph

OG: ファンサしたからって勘違いしないで頂戴
TL: "Because I gave you ban venefits please don't make a mistake"
ED: she's telling him not to mistake fanservice for something else

002
OG: この野郎友達少ない癖により好みしやがって…
TL: "You're so picky...I bet you don't have many friends"
ED: this is a comment on being picky despite not having many friends

OG: 間違いしてんじゃねーぞマゾ犬の分際でよ
TL: "You're just a masochistic dog"
ED: missing entire first half telling her not to get the wrong idea

OG: お前なんかセフレですらねえ
TL: "I'm not even a friend. You're nothing"
ED: he's saying they're not even sex friends

003
OG: 言い直そうか
TL: "Don't make me repeat myself"
ED: she's saying she'll rephrase

004
OG: 大人を舐め腐りやがって
TL: "How dare you look down on adults..."
ED: he's saying that she underestimated adults

009
OG: クソ穴締まる
TL: "You sure are tight!"
ED: eliminated vulgar tone

OG: 日舞の体幹が生きたな
TL: "As expected, the body of Japanese idols feels great!"
ED: he's talking about traditional Japanese dancers' bodies

OG: 叫んでいるすけべカナリア
TL: "Perverted screaming canary"
ED: he's ordering her to scream

and she's actually speaking in the bubbles, those aren't sfx

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