Source: /g/1985040/044ac8259b/

Part 1 is translated. I will be doing the 2nd part (who's by Aisa) soon to complete the doujin.

Some cleanup has done to remove/hide the damaged sides.
I wont be translating the artist commentary on non-doujin pages, so I removed the text instead.

Any grammatical corrections while I'm doing the 2nd part are welcome.

Edit 1:
Edits suggest by orasmase have been made, but wont appear until I've done part 2.

03: since i lost my memory and collapse => since i lost my memory and collapsed
03: before i knew it [...] was strangely kind to me => before i knew it [...] has been strangely kind to me
08: The insides of my mouth is being ravaged => The insides of my mouth are being ravaged / The inside of my mouth is being ravaged
08: The insides of my body is getting numb => The insides of my body are getting numb / My insides are getting numb
13: Sakuya's insides feels too good => Sakuya's insides feel too good
13: Its stiff => It's stiff
21: I want to snuggly my erect dick => I want to snug my erect dick
21: Sakurin => Satorin

Base +8, q91 +24, Jouven +8, funk_u_up +13

good lord it's horrible

Base +5, The Inker -8, Yklvr +6

18: You were kindly to come today => You are kind to come today
26: i always loss => i always lose

Base +8, q91 +24, funk_u_up +13