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[Kaiyuu Kikaku (Suzui Narumi)] OtaCir no Elf Hime 3 | Elf Princess of the Otaku Club 3 [English] [Digital]

[回遊企画 (鈴井ナルミ)] オタサーのエルフ姫3 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2022-12-02 15:52
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:56.34 MiB
Length:30 pages
Favorited:776 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.53

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Posted on 02 December 2022, 17:30 by:   Larequirem    PM
Score +78
when you think this cute elf can't pull any more HNNNGG vanilla moment

she cutely offer a cosplay sex session

RAW:/g/2377402/702b391156/

part 1 /g/2295510/c92d851655/
part 2 /g/2007349/c13af6d423/
Posted on 15 January 2023, 03:38 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +21
There's a lot of missed text here (it's almost always handwritten floating text.) You also have some empty bubbles in there.

General TL advice: don't try to stick to JP phrases, words, and structures 1:1. It creates extremely stiff, awkward, and sometimes erroneous translations. Try to make it sound natural in English. Give it a proper flow.

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