english : /g/2123885/45e60dcae2/

if you colorize a rough grammar translation, I guess that makes this rough grammar as well.

This is what cutegyaru said on the English TR:

p.1 started moving in => you don't "start moving in" with someone. "since I've moved in with"
p.1 everyday => every day
p.3 everyday => every day
p.5 about doing with senpai => about doing IT with senpai
p.5 with the fingers of his manly rough hands => this doesn't make sense. fingers are ALWAYS associated with hands, so it's redundant here. "with his rough, manly fingers" or something similar.
p.5 imagining it in my head => another syntactically incorrect redundancy
p.8 did you hold it all in during business trip => your business trip
p.8 i don't really have much free time => i didn't. he's talking about his past business trip.
p.8 all the things you just said makes me => make me
p.11 you're still want => you

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vanilla content?

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My danimaru tag watch pays off once again!

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Man I love redheads

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tagging based on my comment which is also Noni's

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Love me some vanilla.

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