Each day we die a little more.

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Is this mess machine translated from a spanish TL? Holy shit this sucks

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@Scumbini

To (mis)quote:
But Death who waits for us while we are slowly being
Eroded and forgotten by the world
Is the primordial fatum of humans, gods, and even stars!

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Ah yes, inverted punctuation marks are exactly what I need to spice up the typical garbage machine translation.

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Garbage translation.

I came, anyway.

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Absolutely insane that galleries like these can't be tagged as machine translations. It's even shittier that MTLs aren't penalized.

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I remember translation of vn of mid 00... It was painful, but still people tried sometimes.
This... okay, from Spanish to Eng without change of there marks... some sentences are... at the level when you used some 1.0 Translator like Promt. From Japanese to Spanish to English. In this order.
Sorry, it's not even worse tag "poor grammar" There should be tag "Read on your own risk for your eyes and soul".

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Why is there upside down !

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Some spelling and grammar issues:

[p1]
"Since I enter" - should be past tense or maybe "Since entering"
"relatioship" -> "relationship"
"smell to" -> "smell of"
"fragance" -> "fragrance"
"By chance you came from a date?" -> "Did you perhaps come from a date?"
"Bring her to home" -> "Bring her home"
"by the next time" -> "next time"

[p2]
"then is fine" -> "then it is fine"
"has her son" -> maybe "as her son" (?)
"rigurously" -> "rigorously"

[p3]
"She try" -> "She tried"
"father cheat" -> "father cheated"
"materal" -> "maternal"
"to be in home" -> maybe "in my home" or just "home" (?)
"pelase" -> "please"

[p4]
"beatiful" -> "beautiful"
"to much" -> "too much"

[p5]
"despite being college students" -> either "despite being a college student" or "despite us being college students" (or "even though we're college students")

[p6]
"Then I do it" -> "Then I'll do it"

[p7]
"I gonna" -> "I'm gonna"
"to good" -> "too good"

[p8]
"you have the pussy more wet" -> "your pussy is wetter"
"excited of being watched" -> "excited from being watched"
"If you are so though!" -> ???

[p11]
"You never had suck" -> "You've never sucked"

[p12]
"cuming" -> "cumming" (or "coming")

[p13]
"come one" -> "come on"

[p16]
"I suffer" -> "I suffered"
"more that" -> "more than"
"Why you say that?" -> "Why are you saying that?"

[p17]
"consolling" -> "consoling"

[p21]
"If I knew about about his edipus complex, I wouldn't had date him" -> "If I had known about his Oedipus complex, I wouldn't have dated him"

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The original is located at:

/g/721539/fb164b9244/
pages 139-158

I'm not one to criticize, but I've seen better translations. The big problem here is that I don't think the translator knows English or Japanese, which makes it sort of rough.

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