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[Akireru Shoujo (Akire)] Boku dake ni Amaesasete Kureru Kyonyuu JK Tsuma o Hoka no Otoko ni Dakasete Mita 4 [English] [Youn]

[アキレルショウジョ (アキレ)] 僕だけに甘えさせてくれる巨乳Jk妻を他の男に抱かせてみた4 [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2022-12-21 14:21
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Language:English  TR
File Size:35.92 MiB
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Posted on 21 December 2022, 14:21 by:   nhannaruto    PM
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Raw:

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Previous chapters:
Chapter 1:
Raw: /g/1725495/dcdb878856/
English: /g/2311620/198f849637/

Chapter 2:
Raw: /g/1782171/f4e522fc6b/
English: /g/2070306/635cf4a984/

Chapter 3:
Raw: /g/1837484/b82cafdb30/
English: /g/2407916/0b694b34be/

Working on translating series that no one has been translating even though they were released for quite a while.
This is mainly for my own collection so I skipped editing most of the SFXs and only translated the main text. If anyone is willing to create a better version, feel free to override my works.
Posted on 21 December 2022, 14:50 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +85
rough grammar

every page: missing punctuation (commas, periods.)
general advice: you really don't have to keep referring to everyone in 3rd person when they talk to each other. It's super awkward. "I kept causing trouble to Aoi." > "I kept causing you trouble, Aoi." In fact, you shouldn't keep the exact same structures, phrasing, and expressions used in Japanese 1:1. It just creates mechanical, and sometimes erroneous, translations that read really poorly.

I also encourage you to double check your TLs. I only skimmed it and can tell you're already missing/overlooking some lines. Check the summary and the boss' description, for example.

p.2 having a good marriage with > has a good marriage with (or even just: "She's happily married.")
p.5 you used to always come home looking dejectedly > dejected
p.5 I've been enjoying works > my work
p.6 everyday, you'd work > every day
p.7 kind // warm // big boobs // pamper only me > this entire sequence is missing words
p.9 thanks to his big-breast wife > big-breasted
p.15 one of the best pussy > pussies
p.15 it grasped my dick so tight and wouldn't let go > this is an ongoing action. "It's clamping down on me so hard and won't let go."
p.16 I'm gonna fit it into my shape > not a mistake per se, but just really awkward. "I'm gonna reshape your pussy with my dick!"
p.18 how is it? // i bet it felt much better > tense is in the past. "How was it?"
p.25 i can't wait to rub while enjoying the squishiness of your armpit > besides being really awkward to read, this line doesn't really make sense. he's already in the middle of the act, so why is he speaking about a hypothetical future?
p.25 Aoi-chan's body is perfect everywhere > in every way
p.26 i hate this // i could feel the shape of manager's dicks > ongoing action, so not sure why she's referring to it in the past. "I can..."
Posted on 21 December 2022, 16:29 by:   AutumQueen92    PM
Score +16
Please apply higher standards for yourself and your own collections. The grammar can be improved immensely, especially with the comments here to help.
Posted on 21 December 2022, 17:03 by:   andikap    PM
Score +17
i'm glad someone translating this series, thanks for the upload!!
Posted on 21 December 2022, 17:20 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +45
Don't worry, the author drops this boss NTR plot afterwards.
Posted on 21 December 2022, 17:34 by:   cybeast93    PM
Score +20
@Wilfriback, I like how the sub-plot about the wife getting knocked up by the guys at the hot springs in chapter 02 goes nowhere. Kinda hard to find NTR where the wife gets impregnated by another man and the cuck is okay with it.
Posted on 21 December 2022, 21:54 by:   svines85    PM
Score +72
Yup, pretty sure she's just a whore......good for her :D

Awesome, thanks for all the effort and sharing :)
Posted on 22 December 2022, 04:30 by:   nhannaruto    PM
Score -39
Haha, I wonder what kind of life you're leading to call someone a terrible human just because of this. :)
As I already mentioned, I did it for my own personal use since no one is translating these series and just reshared it to people here. If anyone can provide a better version of translation, feel free to override mine. I appreciated all the helpful feedbacks but for those like you, I don't really care. :)
Posted on 22 December 2022, 05:03 by:   nhannaruto    PM
Score -33
Uploading it here is just a form of storage so I can always come back to it in the future. I don't really care about the GP points so there's nothing else for me to exploit.
As I said, I don't want to waste time arguing more on this so if you or anyone can make a better version, I don't mind you guys overriding this. :)

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