Okay people, the time has come. Here is the full release of Velzea Invasion Final Chapter: Ends and Beginnings. A whole two years have passed ever since I started doing this series and this will be the first series that I'm finishing, I hope you like this final chapter as I've put a lot of love and soul to it! I even cried at some point, you'll see!

Anyway, time for the small synopsis: After saving Shizuka and absorbing Shiroi's succubus queen crystal and corruption, Noriko and her friends Kuro and Shiroi, manage to infiltrate and get into Velzea's throne room, where Velzea was waiting for them. Then the fight starts! Noriko will fight Velzea for the position to become the succubus queen! Who will win? Who will be corrupted? But most importantly, is Noriko trustworthy?

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那边Velzea刚看着Seleena随意虐待眷属、决定做一个和她不一样的女王，这边就随手让眷属燃烧生命玩玩……角色崩了啊……

So Velzea finally becomes a cold-blooded queen burning her servants' lives just for fun like Seleena did...

沧海桑田，Metzea还在，真好啊……

So warm that Velzea has Metzea waiting for her after such a lasting and lonely road...

Last edited on 24 December 2022, 18:51.

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I couldn’t ask for a better ending! It’s twisted and sweet; with Velzeas after life scene making me cry. Perfect way to send off one of my favorite villains of all time

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time change everything

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巫妖王诞生之时，无人幸免
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当巫妖王不能摆脱以此依赖的能量（水晶）时，结局是注定可预见的悲剧。喜剧的是，她坚信彼此的爱是拥有自我意识的能量（水晶）让她相信的，沉迷在这黄金乡是属于她们的美好结局，至于别人已经不重要了。你这个拥有自我意识的狡猾水晶

Last edited on 25 December 2022, 00:40.

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Ironically, Velzea was the only winner in this scenario

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感觉最终篇略显潦草。恶堕的“堕”着墨不多，反而在“恶”上面大加渲染。结局时的那种绝望感有点令人不爽。
Noriko的恶堕过程也不明不白，整体给人的感觉就像是所有角色都是恶堕水晶的奴隶与人偶一样。
Shiro的恶堕更是潦草，几乎没有呈现出恶堕时那种愉悦感。

但还是很出色的作品！

Maybe the final chapter is slightly scribbled. There is not much ink on the "depravity" of the corruption, but rather a lot on the "evil". The sense of despair at the end is a bit unpleasant.
Noriko's corruption process is unclear. The overall feeling is as if all the characters are slaves and dolls of the crystal.
Shiro's depravity is even more scribble, almost not presenting the sense of pleasure in corruption.

But it's still an excellent work!

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This is an excellent finale, and it's damn close to perfect from my perspective.

I've always loved bad ends, something about being permanently changed into a living latex drone constantly experiencing orgasm is a lot hotter than someone getting covered with latex, getting really horny, and fighting it off. The more immortal, the better. Most bad ends involve some kind of death though, which isn't something I like. I like my bad ends uncomplicated by real world stuff, it is fantasy after all. The bad end here is perfect, instead of a lifeless world it's a world of immortal, constantly fucking latex slaves all receiving and giving corruption energy like it's going out of style. fantastic stuff.

The fight scenes are insanely well written and integrated into the story, most movies don't manage to pull that off. Kuro's corruption and concern for Shuroi are constantly present and always amping up the tension, used by friends and foes alike to drive the story. Shuroi's reckless detachment gets her badly hurt and defeated multiple times, a clear and logical outgrowth of her being completely secure in her immense power. Velzea's schemes and clever ploys being defeated by factors she had no way of knowing about making her a dangerous yet surmountable threat. You have very clearly put a lot of thought, effort, and care into these characters and it has not gone unappreciated. I'm not even going to start with the magic system, it's fantastic.

The sex scenes are hot as hell, the fluids being corruptive goo, lots of pumping extremely pleasurable stuff into people, giant gooey tentacles, impossibly skimpy outfits, seeing skin slowly shift into shimmering latex, the aheago, it's all wonderful. Keep doing you, my guy. I absolutely love it.

In conclusion, I like it when the cute magical girls get covered in rubber and cum their brains out while their tits expand. It makes my pp hard

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That ending felt way, way too convenient. And on top of that there wont be a sequel, i feel like Noriko's story deserved a better ending, i'm okay with this series ending but announcing that there wont be a sequel feels like a way to force the characters to disappear. I still hope to see Kuro, Shiroi and of course Noriko in other stories. Like Lyra, they deserved a better conclusion, although i consider Lyra's ending as a complete waste of a great character.
With that, the canon ending i'll consider for Velzea's Invasion is that it was all happening in Velzea's mind as she fell asleep during her work. Or that it is all a tv show like we see in other works.

Other than the story's ending not feeling good imo, i'm not much into bad endings like this one, i really enjoyed the series, i got attached to the characters. Because of that, i started reading these works not just for the lewds, but also for the story, and i'll keep reading more, even if the endings are not going as i expected.

Darkflame, you're great, and i can't wait to see new stories start as the old ones end (And i'll cry when "that time i became a succubus" will come to an end)

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Shiroi and Kuro breakup make me sad 😢

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It's great that Velzea didn't die,she is my favorite😁

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It was kinda ride. Certainly blast final fight. My only issues are with how Shiroi herself and things important to her. First of her final corruption was meh. I was expecting something bigger. But that is just simple thing. Her losing awareness of her bond is simply bad. Not in traditional getting corrupted bad, where there are some pros from that. But she actually loosing everything in process. That just sucks. She deserves revenge arc after this.

It was kinda ride. Certainly blast final fight. My only issues are with how Shiroi herself and things important to her. First of her final corruption was meh. I was expecting something bigger. But that is just simple thing. Her losing awareness of her bond is simply bad. Not in traditional getting corrupted bad, where there are some pros from that. But she actually loosing everything in process. That just sucks. She deserves revenge arc after this.

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well, there was the opprtunity to turn it in something less hostile, maybe those in the throne-room have chosen their fate, but the rest of humanity has NOT, just give the latex to those who WANT it, and don't force it on them, in the end velzea had won, the WORSE outcome of all! it was a litteral chore to read trought thousends of pages, now i wished i had NEVER readed that series!:/

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