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Perfection is the enemy of improvement. If you see any translation mistakes, or other errors, please let me know and I'll correct them in the next release.

Is there a lesson to be learned from this tale of woe?

Yea, I suppose it would have to "All women are two faced."

One thing I know for sure is that I would have sent that pack of animals (including the ex-girlfriend), flying out of the room, and then changed the locks.

12/25/22

Minor update of pgs 1,2,6,7 to bring dialog more in line with the original.

@Asmither
Looks like you missed pg. 4 (3.jpg)

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@TKLF Mea culpa, fixed.

Also, while it looks like a blowjob is occurring on pages 9-15, it is not, she's only giving him a handjob. This is addressed in the dialog. I was surprised by this too.

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wonderful.

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I only read the first few pages but fyi

002
OG: 故郷から遠く離れた地で、一人頑張らせてしまったことを思うと本当に彼女には頭が上がらない。
TL: "When I think how hard she made me work studing[sic], while she was at the far away university, I am really... I'm really grateful to her."
ED: the gist is he's saying that he feels inferior when he thinks about how hard she worked all by herself, esp while being away from home

003
OG: ふふ、おじゃまします！
TL: "Hello, My friend!"
ED: she's saying something along the lines of "pardon the intrusion"

007
OG: 悪戯っぽく笑いながら、彼女は俺の体を優しく撫でてくれる。俺もぎこちないながら、彼女の体に手を這わせた。
TL: She laughs mischevously and gently strokes my body. She says "I'm a little nervous too." Awkwardly, I let my hands crawl on her body
ED: she doesn't say anything in this passage*

008
OG: もう、強いよ
TL: "I'm sorry. I wasn't strong enough to resist"
ED: this is just made up dialogue. she's saying he's being too forceful

OG: ご、ごめん…
TL: "That's okay."
ED: he's apologizing

Last edited on 11 December 2022, 05:22.

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@ rsx205 Thank you for the corrections. I will work them in as best I can when I update, hopefully in 15 days (e-hentai rules, not my rule.) That does explain some mysteries, especially on page 8.

Without a doubt I will rewrite page 2,3. Page 7: I may well modify, I need to think about it some. Page 8: Was quite the mystery to me. I couldn't figure out what was going on there. I saw his response of "I'm sorry", but her line that he was responding to was just idiotic.

As for the title of the story, I don't think that e-hentai will let me change that, but I'll try. I just lifted it from the Japanese language version on e-hentai.

If there are other changes, please let me know and I will rewrite/modify them.

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Stupid as fuck. Why cuck Just not cut her off love my ass girlfriend not even deserve this guy just mere slut but guy so fuckin wimp Just scream get the fuck out from My place or i call cops. Done but another pathetic wimp Just no have strenght to fuckin talk how its works? Should i try it can i speak in this situation ofcourse i can i can beat the fuck out from this punks. Bullshit forced cuck ntr always dumb as hell.

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Gambare Asmither-san.

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The plot is just too dumb and jumped places.

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I don't want to put too fine a point on this, but if you've come here expecting to find fine literature, you may have made a mistake. This is hentai, and very stimulating hentai at that, if you ask me. If you want great character development, a rich environment, and a finely woven tale, you may want to do a web search of 'William Shakespeare' and read a few of his plays. To the best of my knowledge the old bard never wrote any hentai, but he'd no doubt would have found something that met his eclectic tastes.

Last edited on 12 December 2022, 07:42.

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wholesome 100 moment

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nobody expects fine literature going in into hentai, just a plot that isn't dumb. Unfortunately this is another NTR work without it.

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After this situation, they all left my house. When they were gone I changed the locks on the door. My ex-girlfriend came back and started banging loudly on the door, demanding I let her in, so I was forced to call the cops. None of them ever bothered me again. The end.

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@noname31 Bravo! That is exactly the epilog that I think happened. The ex-girlfriend was cute, but a little too screwy for me. I believe that she thought she was doing the narrator a favor, by keeping him caged.

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More ESL and MTL nonsense. You guys actually need to be lobotomized

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Who the fuck wrote this, a dictionary?

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虽然没太看懂……

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overall an excellent NTR, but I thought it could be much better with a fuller ending. Sensational that she provoked him at the end and left him almost coming, a good cuckold must know his place. The scene had to end with him closing his eyes, denying the situation and hearing senpai's satisfied roar, while he gave that strong cumshot after holding it for a long time. He could have an epilogue with him opening his eyes and his girlfriend in front of him, when he convinces himself that it's not real, she opens her mouth and shows senpai's fresh cum in her mouth

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