you erased a bunch of text outside of the bubbles so I assume that's why it's tagged as a redraw?
like on page 2 OG: ノックしろって言ったでしょーがっ!! TL: N/A ED: "I told you to knock!!"
003 OG: なんでそんなキャピキャピした装備を…? TL: "Why are you wearing such capacious equipment...?" ED: the gist is that her getup makes her seem spunky. did you just MTL this to get "capacious"?