This is not an official translation.

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01002845.html

1:
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2:
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You might want to specify who is translating then, as there is a likely chance F (the writer) will hire an official translator and upload to fakku or fanbox either next month or in a few. (As stated on bottom of description, it's taken a while b4 though).
Edit: No need to apologize, i just suggested for clairy :) have a nice holiday

Last edited on 27 December 2022, 04:53.

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I apologize, I was thinking about it when uploading.

The translation was done by "TG Unofficial Translations".

I'll see if there is a way I can address this in the gallery itself.

Thank you for pointing it out.

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seems like a rough TL

001
OG: 陽太が陽菜に変えられる一月前
TL: "I was turned into a girl about a month ago."
ED: "A month before Hinata was turned into Hina" (I'm unsure about the reading of her new name since I didn't see it while skimming the first 2 chapters)

OG: けれど妹の心奈の不思議な力で若返らされて / 心愛という名前の女の子にされてしまい
TL: "My sister Kokona somehow did this to me." / "She used a mysterious power to not only transform but make me younger too"
ED: "But my age was reversed and I was turned into a younger girl named Kokoa by my little sister Kokona's mysterious power"

004
OG: 昨日、放課後に忘れ物が会って教室に戻ったらさ
TL: "I forgot something in class and went back to class yesterday..."
ED: missing detail "after school"

OG: 消してやってもいいけど…
TL: "Even if I were to erase it... I still saw you..."
ED: he just says "I can erase it, but..."

005
OG: とりあえず口で一発抜いてくれよ
TL: "You could use your mouth to keep me quiet."
ED: "Just suck me off one time for now"

006
OG: そ…そんな…
TL: "What a...brat!" Such...
ED: she's just in disbelief here, no name calling this line makes no sense now

007
OG: い…痛いって！
TL: "It hurts! My stomach..."
ED: she doesn't mention any body parts

OG: 動くぞ
TL: "He is cumming"
ED: wrong speaker, wrong action. he's announcing that he's gonna start moving

OG: や、やめ…
TL: "Oh no..."
ED: she's trying to tell him to stop

008
OG: 奥までっ…届いてっ…
TL: "He surprised me from behind. ♥"
ED: she's talking about how far in he's reaching

OG: だめぇっ…
TL: "Oh no...he is cumming inside.♥"
ED: she doesn't say anything about where he's cumming

010
OG: ねぇ咲良さん今週の日曜日いっしょうに遊ばない？
TL: "Hey Sakura-chan. Could you not come this Sunday?"
EDL: "Hey Sakura-san, wanna hang out together this Sunday?"

OG: いいけど…急にどうしたの？
TL: "Why can't I go all of a sudden?"
ED: "Sure...but why all of a sudden?"

OG: 心愛ちゃんと浩平君も一緒に
TL: "It's going to just be me and my sister"
ED: she's saying she'll invite Kokoa and Kouhei too

OG: いいよね?咲良さん
TL: "Is that okay? Sakura?"
ED: since you're using honorifics elsewhere, Sakura-san

OG: うん…
TL: "Huh?"
ED: she is agreeing here while under hypnosis

OG: うん折角さそってくれたんだし
TL: "Of course Kohei-kun"
ED: missed detail about them getting invited

Last edited on 30 December 2022, 00:18.

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Seems to me that girls (including former boys) who have had a sexual encounter with a Succubus and embrace the derived pleasure from it, become a Succubus themselves. Kokoa didn't seem to have any powers before CH 2, but now that she (and Hina) went all in with the sexual hedonism, they have the same powers as Kokona (white haired seemingly OG Succubus from Ch 1).

We never really saw much of Hina's original personality. I wonder if Hina is still herself if that makes any sense. Unlike Kokoa, aside from a newfound highly aggressive libido, her mind wasn't really tampered with like Kokoa IIRC.

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The translation quality is really bad, some lines are completely wrong.

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Gallery updated with new translations.

Last edited on 28 December 2022, 21:55.

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Other Language or Version
Japanese
English translated by TGUnofficialTranslations, You are here!
Chinese translated by 瑞树汉化组

Series part : サキュバス倶楽部へようこそ ～妹の妹♀にされた俺♂～
Japanese
Japanese
Chinese translated by 瑞树汉化组
Korean
English

Series part : サキュバス倶楽部へようこそ2 妹の妹♀にされたけど彼女ができました♥
Japanese
Chinese translated by 瑞树汉化组
Korean
English

Last edited on 05 January 2023, 22:37.

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since you messaged me to take another look I read the first 20ish pages. The gallery still contains awkward wording/grammatical errors, made up words or phrases in place of the real dialogue, and missing details which are important in conveying author intent.

Did you just run this through a different machine translator? It actually regressed and you introduced some new errors in different lines
I think I'm being pretty charitable with some of these corrections by not mentioning a lot of things. It's nice that you want to fix your gallery, but asking me to read it again after feeding it into another machine translator is kind of a slap in the face

001
OG: 本当は男で年ももっと上だった
TL: "I was an older man"
ED: not technically incorrect but needs a reword to show author intent better. he is asserting that he is actually male and used to be older than his current self

005
OG: くっ…
TL: "Can't breathe"
ED: she's not speaking anything here

OG: ッ…！！
TL: "So!!"
ED: she's not speaking anything here

009
OG: そのときに浩平がボクから誘ったってことにしたみたい
TL: "At the time, it seems that Kohei decided to invite me"
ED: wondering how you got this TL compared to the previous one (MTL?)

OG: 何だよそれ悪いのは全部浩平じゃないか
TL: So everything wrong here was caused by Kohei.
ED: missing original intent, she's clearly unhappy

011
OG: よ、よろしく…
TL: Yo. Nice to meet you too.
ED: he isn't saying "Yo", he's stuttering. and same issue with the bubble before this one, "Nice to meet you" doesn't convey the original intent

012
OG: ねぇ♥咲良さんもいないことだし
TL: "Hey, Sakura-san isn't here either.♥"
ED: even without knowing the real meaning, this line makes no sense since they just determined that Sakura's running late before entering the establishment. this line is just setting up a reason for the next line

OG: 3人で気持ちいいことしない？♥
TL: "Do you not feel comfortable with just the three of us? ♥"
ED: she's asking if he wants to do something pleasurable as a group of 3

OG: き…気持ちいいことって?
TL: "I'm[sic] feel fine... What do you mean?"
ED: he's repeating the last part of her question

015
OG: うんっ…
TL: "Huh..."
ED: she's agreeing

OG: 俺…もう…
TL: "Me...too..."
ED: he's close to cumming

016
OG: 一杯でたね♥
TL: "It was full. ♥"
ED: she's commenting on the size of his load

017
OG: どう？男の子ってこういうの好きでしょ？
TL: "Soft and fluffy. Boys like this don't they?"
ED: she doesn't say soft and fluffy

019
OG: 今日はここで浩平君の男を使い切ってもらうんだから♥
TL: "I'm going to use up Kohei-kun's man here today."
ED: she's describing succubus things

021
OG: やめてくれって
TL: "Please stop."
ED: she isn't telling him to stop, she's quoting

OG: 今さら何言ってるの？
TL: "What are you saying? It's too late for that now."
ED: she doesn't say anything about it being too late

OG: あれだけボクのことを好き勝手にしておいて
TL: "Just do whatever you want with me"
ED: she's commenting about how he's already been doing whatever he wanted to her for some time

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001
"I was turned into a girl named Kokoa. She's now my older sister and ..."

006
"I didn't day"

012
"I'm feel fine..."

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Just to add to it, her new name is not Moe but Momo.

Last edited on 30 December 2022, 17:37.

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She seems to have more extensive mental changes than the other girls even aside from the fact she's younger.

On page 30 it say's "Kohei likes Sakura right? If so I'll let you be with ME forever" but Sakura isn't there so shouldn't that be her?

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