someone requested me a better TL for this one, so here you go.

finally a decent translation, we appreciate the effort.

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ah, I already had the script ready for this one, but c101 came along... but oh well

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@coffedrug ah i'm sorry if I shouldn't have done this I didn't know you were gonna work on this.

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Thank you for this - one of Urakan's best

Kindly fix the other MTL'd Urakan as well
/g/1991505/e7dc9cac3b/

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I only skimmed a little but you cut details out that even the previous MTL version was able to preserve (or just got it wrong altogether)

002
OG: うひょー
TL: "Sea~!"
ED: this is just an expression of excitement

003
OG: たまんねーなおい
TL: "Woah! It's round like a ball!"
ED: he's saying he can't get enough of her ass

007
OG: 体が熱くなって頭もボーっとしてきたこれってまさかー
TL: "My body is getting hot, and my head is starting to feel dizzy"
ED: missing detail, she starts getting suspicious at the end

013
OG: なんだかおばさんエッチな気分になってきたわ
TL: "I'm starting to feel a little strange"
ED: she's feeling like a dirty old lady

015
OG: まさかこの子たちこんなところでわたしを犯す気なの拓たちがすぐそこにいるのに
TL: "... Taichi and the others are right here!"
ED: wrong name

based on your prev uploads I'm not convinced this isn't MTL either

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@rsx205 sorry for the mistakes, I started learning japanese around an year ago, and translating these were a hobby project for me to improve. I can grasp the general meaning, but i still need more practice to get the minute nuances, this was one of the reasons I picked up doujins to TL instead of manga where the nuances matter much more.
Again sorry for the mistakes, if many people find the quality to be very poor, I'll stop uploading my TLs.

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all I'm saying is that in your other releases I read, there were some telltale signs, and a lot of the mistakes matched with MTL pretty much 1:1, down to the wording and missing details that MTL can't parse

but yeah language learning is tough, no doubt (and best of luck with that)

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我直接社保好吧，幻视一下古早网络文学少妇白洁

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4.65* and 88 ratings should say enough about what we think about your translations, they're appreciated and we hope to see some others get fixed, like this one from urakan for example

/g/1991505/e7dc9cac3b/

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@rsx205
wait, so I should still work on my translation? I'll be honest I didn't read this at all. But if this one still counts as MTL, then it does worth the time to fix it

edit:
Yeah, I read the raw with this translation and that MTL, and even the MTL makes less mistakes than this one.
I'm going to still working on my version

Last edited on 11 January 2023, 05:02.

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@rsx205

I tried using both ichigo reader/raw manga fan on the raw version and both translated Kyouko's sentence on page 6 to "I'll paint that myself" but this one correctly said "I'll apply it myself" so maybe this is @chalklog's own translation and not an MTL.. sorry I'm no expert on these just noticed this one

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@Coffedrug I'd say go for it, especially since you already finished the script for it

@I Love Takashima yeah I only said that a lot matched up with MTL output (not everything), and I was referencing some of their previous releases. you don't have to take my word for it, though. you can try it out on other mistakes I pointed out, including their previous galleries. the truth is probably somewhere in the middle. part MTL, part human. it is what it is

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series order:
1. /g/1576435/e223d3333a/
2. /g/1653054/1b848fd769/
3. /g/2069188/2211e07049/ [MTL]
4. /g/2110828/959bf25ec8/
5. /g/2429913/17fa286f16/ (you are here)

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Now it makes sense. She's not fucking every dick that comes her way and the brother-in-law matches her libido.

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