This one was commissioned by Anon!

It’s translated from Chinese to English!
Translation by Maddeo and typeset by Mylloux Delusion!

I’m accepting commissions now! :D
Prices range from $0.7 to $2.8 per page, however those that require extra typesetting / redrawing effort might cost more, just shoot me an email at [email protected] if you wanna discuss to have a doujin translated :)

Chinese version at /g/2115009/b9902fe244/

I realise the character is Kiryuin Satsuki from KILL la KILL, however her name here is specified as Aoi Ryuko in page 1.

Oh damn, just seeing the first page I immediately clicked and I wasn't disappointed

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Oh nice, this one actually got translation, thx sir

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YEAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! i waited so long for this getting a english translation

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rough grammar. pretty much every line of dialogue has a mistake in it.

every page: Mdm is not a thing. You should be using "Miss", but this also makes no sense because you're already using honorifics, so stick to "san/sama". Also, what are periods? And you need to use apostrophes when you contract words. Fucking > Fuckin'

This is a sample. There's more mistakes than this.

p.1 what's her reason here > What is she doing here? or What's the reason behind her being here?
p.2 Why is Aoi senpei doing here > What
p.3 look at me and see properly > and watch carefully
p.3 and sit down towards the back > and crouch/squat down
p.5 Butt / move > [The] butt moves. Better would be "Shove/Stick // your butt out."
p.5 such a lewd panty > such lewd [this word is awful, by the way] panties
p.5 buthole > butthole
p.6 how prestige > prestigious, but this word makes no sense here.
p.6 the sounds coming from her arse sure is > are
p.6 her panties is > are
p.7 woi woi > that's not a word, or even an expression of anything.
p.8 asshair and bald pussy > this has to be a mistake. how's her pussy "bald" when it's fucking hairy? lmao
p.11 did aoi's face turned > turn
p.12 a shot in the dark to get pass this > past
p.15 Jeeey > Did you mean "heeey" or something lol
p.16 and came only after > and you came only after a few thrusts!
p.16 if there's any of you lot who wants to shoot > If any of you wants to shoot
p.17 well the > then
p.19 how i wish i also have dick > i also had

Last edited on 11 January 2023, 18:26.

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제발 누가 이 명작 좀 번역해줘,,,ㅜㅠㅠ

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Loose unit

Last edited on 16 January 2023, 10:03.

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What the hell did i just read...

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Should I laugh or fap? At least, give me some instruction.

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