This is my first upload so I apologize if I messed up the titling convention or anything like that. This is a rewrite where I tried to stay close to the original translation while also removing the NTR. Enjoy!

Original translation: /g/1616796/06f6db6838/
Raw: /g/1184484/478fb1c917/
Me: https://twitter.com/NTRemover

An account with the name NTRemover and rewriting NTR galleries? This sounds very good, you have my attention.
Very good that you didn't just rewrote everything but just the actual "important" text. And even edited out the senpai on page 8!

Thank you for your work! I am looking forward for your next projects. And I can't wait to read the comments here ... haha

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the dialogue is unironically fucking hilarious dude, god tier rewrite

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Holy shit this is just beyond hilarious.
Rewrites to remove NTR but it still sounds like NTR dialogue.

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so... fvcking... zased...

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at least have the common courtesy to remove the artist name that you're going to vandalize you dumb rape baby

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