1. Wrong resolution. Originals are at 3031 x 4230. Download the archive or the non-downsized torrent (right side.)
2. You could put some effort into removing floating text and redrawing, but I guess this is your first release.
3. Some of your translation is wrong (see p.8 floating text. it's basically made-up.)

rough grammar

every page: random punctuation.

p.3 my son seems to come late from the club activities > it seems my son will come home late from his club activities.
p.3 of course I got dumped > this makes no sense. he can't get "dumped" if he's not dating her. I got turned down/rejected
p.3 a month ago, I build up > built up
p.4 I made a promise to make memories for just one day > "I promised her this would only be a one-day/time thing." if you want to keep the super clunky "make memories" part, then I guess you can add "so that we can make memories."
p.6 with rumi-san's sweet and voice and her scent // makes me so excited > Rumi-san's sweet voice and scent // make me
p.9 it's feels > it
p.15 rumi-san tongue > rumi-san's
p.15 it's so big that my chin will come off > lol what. "It's so big I feel like my jaw's gonna dislocate!"
p.17 it's the first that someone cum in my throat > it's the first time someone's cum down my throat
p.20 my waist feels like floating > it feels like my waist is floating
p.21 but no matter how sweet it is > sweet doesn't work here. maybe "no matter how good it felt"
p.21 would you like to stay over at my house after a long time > after a long time makes 0 sense
p.22 please take a good care > cut "a"

there's more, but there you go

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There needs to be something done about this. It is getting out of control.

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This is better then most.

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Thanks for the translation

Base +5, SenpaiNM7 -6, Th3 Sl0th -6, joeyzz +6, hobohobo -30, Megarock90 -7, bagiaaa -13, keramat -6

mosaic is so shitty for doujins. why not just do full censorship even that is better than mosaic.

Base +9

Book 1: You're Here!

Book 2: /g/2437060/9015ad2c6f/

Book 3: /g/2448320/55ee8afa0d/

Omnibus Book 1-3+Extra: /g/2751426/a36443127e/

Book 4: /g/2730463/c826269957/

Book 5: /g/2947699/3c80f8a486/

Base +6, Celibate_Wanker +14

Interesting how far her other slipper is from her on page 33

Base +2

@fpga I'm fully disagree with you!

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