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[odin (Kurokawa Izumi)] Koga-tan ni Gyugyutto Amaete | I want to be pampered by Koga-Tan! (THE iDOLM@STER: Shiny Colors) [English] [Im Simon! 93.7]

[オーディン (黒川いづみ)] こがたんにギュギュっと甘えて♡ (アイドルマスター シャイニーカラーズ) [英訳]

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Posted:2023-01-21 20:43
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Language:English  TR
File Size:21.18 MiB
Length:28 pages
Favorited:407 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.49

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Posted on 21 January 2023, 20:43 by:   imsimon937    PM
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One of my first edited doujins. this one's about Tsukioka Kogane from Idolmaster Shiny Colors! I hope you like it!
Posted on 21 January 2023, 21:04 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +78
I'm not gonna comment on the TL, but your editing, and especially your redrawing needs a lot of work.

1. Please add a white stroke to text that needs it. Check the JP. All the text has a white stroke, and this is to make it easier to read when it's slapped on transparent/non-white bubbles.
2. Redrawing colored works is probably the hardest thing you can attempt, but lazily applying CAF everywhere without actually redrawing just ruins the art and it's very obvious.
3. Periods and commas exist, and you need to use them.
4. Guides below.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Last edited on 21 January 2023, 22:09.
Posted on 21 January 2023, 21:54 by:   Noni    PM
Score +138
Raw can be found here: /g/1688213/57383c951d/

Great to see new editors on the scene! As you practice more, you'll get better every time. But for a first time, it's actually quite decent. Don't get discouraged!
Posted on 22 January 2023, 00:24 by:   anon1984a    PM
Score +23
It's really nice to finally see some more Kogane translations
Posted on 22 January 2023, 11:39 by:   MackDiesel    PM
Score +8
From what I can tell, there's other girls drawing attention (Sakuya, Madoka, Chiyuki, etc), so it's nice to see someone specifically going for Kogane stuff.

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