2023-01-22: Updated with missing first page and a cleanup of the translation based on feedback from comments.

Taken from the "Pakorare Award" tankoubon released a while ago that doesn't seem to have gotten much attention from translators (at least that I can see).

Enjoy, and as usual, support the artist if you liked it!

Artist:
https://www.pixiv.net/users/463664
https://www.dlsite.com/books/author/=/author_id/AJ010712

Official:
https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ234173.html

Raw:
/g/2314715/63b01087cc

So in the course of of her "sexecution" she got raped by middle-aged guy and gangbanged "off-screen". Woooow! How adventurous and original!

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poorly written to the point where I'd assume its a rewrite.

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@OP
Her name is Azuka, not Asuka.

edit: thanks

@Red 255
If you're gonna throw the "rewrite" word around, you need to prove it. I'm not going to praise this as the best translation that's ever graced hentai, but a quick look at the raws doesn't make me believe this should be tagged as either a rewrite or a rough translation.

Last edited on 22 January 2023, 22:13.

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Rough translation tag?

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You left out the first page.

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Thanks for the feedback, and I did indeed miss out the first page from the upload. I'll post an updated version shortly.

Edit: Done. Missing page is there (thanks Sivart), the MC is now named Azuka (thanks cutegyaru) and there's been a general cleanup of the script and a few translation fixes. Hopefully somebody else eventually does the whole tank and ends up doing it justice.

Last edited on 22 January 2023, 13:44.

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@cutegyaru I don't need to convince you of anything, nor would it serve any purpose seeing as you cannot read.

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The lottery is rigged to that first guy.

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pretty sure the girl from the first page is in another one of their works right? if not its crazy to waste that design.

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