Loving the series, keep it up!

some minor correction suggestions (spelling/grammar):

page 11: doing thing like this -> doing things like this
win against the dick -> win against this dick (or if "win against dicks" she's talking about dicks in general, "the dick" just reads a little weird)

page 13: your scraping -> you're scraping

page 16: doint it -> doing it
you feel it to, don't you Akino. -> you feel it too, don't you Akino?

Base +7, rsx205 +23, Raiya95 -8, GO_KENTA +24, cutegyaru +22, Analfe Tish +9, Coledas Ukgent +7, stupid army +9, QThoney +2, 58569 +6, blessingbozz +7, blaqkthespian +6

Man's whore mother ruined him for life, Sad!

Base +6, Coledas Ukgent +7, 5589 -6, Alayah -6, 58569 +6, tscecest -6, IM_Mortal +7, blaqkthespian -6, likeyouknowwhatever +5, dalkia +6, Taelin -6

Sad his mother turn him in to cuck. Better if his mom treat him as loser and he grow up be hating sluts like her mom but mother treat him kindly so its only do worse for him turn him in to weirdo who like watch how precios woman get fucked. Great job mother hope she have nice afterlife in HELL.

Base +4, punkex -7, mahoraking13 -13, Coledas Ukgent -7, Maxer123 -6, 5589 -6, Alayah -6, MelmothTheWanderer -30, elvendrunk -11, IM_Mortal +7, likeyouknowwhatever +5, Dimon_Tools +6, Taelin -6

If I remember correctly, the author, Pon Takahanada is a woman right?

This lady is based as F.

Interesting how a lot of her works have NTR elements in them.

I wonder if her works are her own fantasies to cheat on some possible RL spouse of hers though?

Base +3, punkex +7, Coledas Ukgent +7, Maxer123 +6, 5589 +6, darkrider1 +9, blaqkthespian +6, likeyouknowwhatever -5, omniwhore +2

Shujin ni wa Naisho

Chapter 1 : /g/2384904/3d99bb3f09/
Chapter 2 : /g/2391909/5d0f0325bd/
Chapter 3 : /g/2397823/cc712f5e4c/
Chapter 4 : /g/2413847/adb7178ab0/
Chapter 5 : /g/2417988/b655965647/
Chapter 6 : /g/2434308/505a9a6b2a/
Chapter 7 : /g/2440682/b165a96d62/
Chapter 8 : /g/2447222/721f7b15fe/

Base +17, Coledas Ukgent +7, stupid army +9, 58569 +6, tscecest +6, darkrider1 +9, blaqkthespian +6

"..Chief! You're shocked it peeled your eyes open!"

LOL That was a good one. XD

Base +15, QThoney +2, tscecest +6, Nicosai +19, Torkul +6, Sulevart +6, Azura Meta +6

To think Brock from Pokemon would have an netorase fetish.

Base +6, Azura Meta +6

The husband is seriously weird.

Base +9, Taelin -6