thanks so much for translating these dude i do hope you do the rest as well

Base +4, lauradorva +8

Words fail me to express my thanks, The team who translate this did a great job

Base +3, lauradorva +8

not only is this your usual MTLing but for some reason you also went ham with the rewrites in this chapter

007
OG: ここは広いけど一本道だから道なりに行けばお仲間と合流できるし脱出もできれよお
TL: "This place is big, but there are two paths, so if you follow the right path, you can find your friends and get out of here~"
ED: how'd you get 2 paths? she's literally saying there's a single straight path

015
OG: このっ / 調子に
TL: "You little..." / "Nasty..."
ED: she's encouraging herself

018
OG: ざぁ～こ
TL: "Good girl~"
ED: calling her weak

019
OG: へぇ…
TL: "He He He"
ED: this isn't a laugh

OG: もともと母乳体質なんだね〜
TL: "Wow your body was modified to release breast milk~"
ED: she's saying the exact opposite. she's genetically predisposed to lactating

OG: ぶ・ざ・ま
TL: "This so called 「knight」 is pa-the-tic"
ED: she's just calling her disgraceful

030
OG: …でもこんなカッコしてると〜
TL: "But we need to have a talk...When you're dressed like this~"
ED: just talking about her appearance and figure in general. also the first half is made up

034
OG: ゼリーを入れてた時間が長すぎたかな〜？
TL: "Wow look at you~ Maybe I put too much jelly in or did I leave it in for too long~...?"
ED: she's only wondering if she left the jelly in too long

041
OG: もう諦め…
TL: "Ready to submit?"
ED: wrong speaker

046
OG: それだけは
TL: "My ass leaking..."
ED: she's just in the middle of saying how [cumming] is the only thing she doesn't want to do

OG: …仕方ないなぁ…
TL: "Wow you are so hot, guess I have no choice..."
ED: the first half is made up

047
OG: トイレじゃないけど
TL: "It's not a toilet but that won't stop you~"
ED: the second half is made up

OG: その場で出すよりはマシでしょ〜？
TL: "My loser will sit on it, okay? She does not want to make me angry, right~?"
ED: she's saying it's still better to cum in that thing than cumming on the spot

OG: …もしかして恥ずかしいの？
TL: "Are you ashamed? That's stupid, we both know..."
ED: the second half is made up

OG: いまさら？
TL: "That my loser is a dirty slut~"
ED: she's just commenting on how amusing it is to be ashamed at this point after all she's been subjected to

OG: でも、早くしたほうがいいよ〜
TL: "But you'd better hurry up, if you take too long and make a mess on the floor~"
ED: the second half is made up

OG: もたもたしてると〜
TL: "I will punish loser worse than you've seen so far~"
ED: entire line is made up, "If you're too slow..."

048
OG: おそわれちゃうよ〜っ
TL: "Poor loser, this must be like living through a bad dream for you~"
ED: she's saying she'll be tormented/haunted for taking too long

049
OG: 意地悪でえっちな私たちがあなたのお願いを素直に聞くと思った？
TL: "Did my loser think I would take requests from her? Foolish girl you are mine and will do and accept whatever I want~"
ED: "Did you think someone as malicious and perverted as I would obediently hear out your requests?" entire second half is made up

and most of the moans/sfx are made up as usual

Base +23, cutegyaru +22, hujijuice +6, as102 +13, Enki17 +10, Qweritys +6, tobeunforgiven2 +26, Slime209 +7

@Suru Hanashi - TBF most of these errors / re-writes work well enough.

Base +6