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Just wanted to say this since it bothers me quite a bit when I see it.
You probably have leading set to auto which is fine for most fonts, but in cases like this, you are better off dialing it in manually so that the leading isn't so big.

To explain a bit more, the leading for "The next day" is perfect but if you have a look at your main dialogue font you can see that there's big gaps between each line. Apart from it making your TL look inconsistent, it just makes typesetting a bit more difficult for no reason.

Other than that, keep up the good work as the good "throwaway" lol.

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Ahh, I see what you mean, yea. I leave it at auto-leading 100% for Tight Spot BB, but it does look weirdly spaced in some cases, that's true.

Thanks!

Uploaded a new version with fixed leading in most of the dialogue, and also the "FIN" I forgot the first time around.

Last edited on 03 February 2023, 05:15.

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