raws: /g/1756444/37cc5ab359/

I did this as a method to learn Japanese and to improve my rusty English, so I'm not sure if my translation were accurate, but I'm pretty sure that I butchered the grammar. Sorry if it's not that good.

Also
I fucking love tomboys, god I wish that were me.

Salam Sange

Pretty solid for a first attempt. Some grammar issues, yeah. Write your script in a Google Docs or something next time. Most of your mistakes are really basic. Autocorrrect would catch most of it.

Also, make sure you punctuate. Lots of missing/wrong periods, commas, question marks, etc.

rough grammar (just a sample)

p.3 all the sudden > of a
p.3 we're just close friend > friends
p.4 how many times you get confessed to > how many times did you get confessed to?
p.6 your paizuri gotten better > your paizuri's
p.7 since we're attending different middle school > since we went to different middle schools
p.7 cause > 'cause
p.8 that her tits has grown > have grown
p.8 they've gotten so big arent they > haven't they?
p.8 it's doesn't > it didn't
p.8 so we try having sex just like what it was in the magazine, game and manga every day just for fun > so we try having sex every day for fun just like they do in magazines, games, and manga

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I could swear this was going to be netorare after seeing the cover and the title

Life is good sometimes

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My kink is to read doujins that have a clearly ntr cover but the content is not

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@Lirula
Was going to make the same exact comment

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classic never judge a book by its cover right here...

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Salam sange! Semoga betah dikritik senior-senior ya. Jangan lupa proofreading juga.

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How does a cover like that not end in ntr?

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Tingkatkan lagi bang.

Salam sange.

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@Loki The Flameshield

Because the NTR bull is the childhood friend

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This is not ntr???

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Kinda like 'sex friend childhood' from orcsoft.

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