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Kakuninii's new common sense altering doujin is here! I wasn't originally a huge fan of the realistic backgrounds or PoV, but they definitely grew on me, and the dialogue is as casual as ever. I hope my translation was able to do justice to the laid-back attitude of the original.

As always, please post any feedback or corrections in the comments, and I'll fix them as soon as possible.

Oh hell yes! This is one of the few guys who actually knows how to write good hypnosis. Props to the translator.

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My boner is confuse with how casual is it.

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My favorite part was when the cashier cleaned the cunt of the girl who broke her laptop and served a semen-infused smoothie to a JC.

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excuse me! excuse me! Would you take this one orgasm or double it and give it to the next person???

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It was so casual in fact I couldnt even get it up and just read it for the absurd casualness of it

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the only thing that bothers me is the senseless breaking of the laptop

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It seems that someone was very inspired while reading Goodbye Eri lol

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thank you very much , i really love kakuninii plots and how it goes

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Not really an exhibitionism, if there is not risk of being seen, since audience is being mind controlled as well.

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Pretty unique stuff, and it's great, great translation too

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Hey, on page 28, you translated the guys question as "Are you in middle school, Mia?"

In the original he asks みあちゃん〇校生？

That should translate as high school (高校生) rather than any other level of schooling (小学生、中学生、大学生）because of the use of 校 rather than 学 as the second kanji. So the little sister is 3 years older than what was portrayed.

Other than that one little thing, great translation! Thanks!

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Damn that laptop breaking felt unnecessary...

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My fav DJ artist.

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