was this intended to be a rewrite? a lot of changes just aren't in the raw
001 OG: とある国へ訪れているセレナは不思議な本と出逢う… TL: "On her journey to become a stronger trainer, Serena visits a new Pokemon region" ED: "While visiting a certain region, Serena came across a mysterious book."
002 OG: 本の中へ吸い込まれポケモンと認識される世界へ飛ばされる TL: "Welcome trainer! Enjoy your new life in a world where you become a pokemon!" ED: "She was sucked into the book and brought to a world where she would be viewed as a Pokemon"
OG: 私は…どうなっちゃうの… / 誰か…助け… TL: "Oh Ash!" / "What's happening to me?!!" ED: she just cries for help, she doesn't call for anyone specific
OG: ズキズキ TL: "welcome new pokemon...welcome new pokemon..." ED: this is just sfx for her headache
OG: 眩しい光に包まれて…えっと… TL: "Welcome new pokemon?" ED: she's remembering how she got swallowed up by a bright light
OG: ムクリ TL: "welcome new pokemon...welcome new pokemon..." ED: this is sfx for her slowly getting up
003 OG: え…何か変よ…言葉が言ってる発音じゃない!? TL: "Wha-...what's wrong with me?" ED: missing detail, she notices how she can't say actual words
OG: ダメ…立っていられない… TL: "Oh ho oh! I...I..." ED: she's saying she can't stand up
OG: 風の噂で聞いたことが…不思議な本に吸い込まれた人は生涯その世界でポケモンとして生きるって… TL: "Oh ho oh! Was what that weird voice I heard...about...becoming a pokemon...true?" ED: she's thinking back about rumors she heard about people getting sucked into weird books and becoming pokemon in those worlds
OG: まさか…それが私って事? TL: "Did that refer to me?!" ED: she's wondering if she's actually experiencing what those rumors mentioned
@GottaLewdThemAll My suggestion for your next comic ash get gender change and suck into a book and become an Pokemon too and she will meet his friend that is also an pokemon