Clearly this Ripushko does not lack creative talent, both in narrative and in art. The world is both vibrant and fascinating. But they do need to spend a bit more time establishing the fundamentals of the setting, because this kind of feels like a sequel to something rather than a standalone piece. Like, they use a lot of words without explaining what they mean. Context can only help so much.

Or, you know, I could just be an idiot and this is part of some larger collaborative universe I'm unaware of and I'm here criticizing The Two Towers because I didn't read The Fellowship.

Edit: @HellUpLine
That's all I could find either. It certainly helps establish the backstory for the Necromancer Elf and his boytoy, both of whom are clearly slated to be the protagonists if this story ever continues, but unfortunately it doesn't serve to explain much else.

Last edited on 04 March 2023, 01:21.

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@Moojuice

it looks in fact , part of collection, but thats all I could find, both here or author twitter:

/g/2417887/74366de096/

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It seems the end is not quite a happy ending.Theres a crisis beneath the surface.

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so i am starting to dislike lesbains when reading

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You can check Ripushko's Tapas for a comic (that's in order and translated) that explains the gods and universe they created which explains a lot about each of the races like mermaids.

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this reads like someone's years long D&D campaign, except you start on the fourth year out of ten

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